Reviews for Learning to Kneel
Guest chapter 13 . 8/29/2015
I'm loving this store and it will get finished at some point. You have a Gide for writing.
LZ chapter 13 . 8/5/2015
This story is absolutely amazing. I want to read more! Do you know of any other stories like it you could recommend?
dedemacky chapter 13 . 8/4/2015
Please could you start the story again please as I would love to see whare you go with it next x
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 6/20/2015
this was a interesting first chapter. Wow Bella came a long way in her life to be in college getting a education, and wanting better for herself.I wonder who has taken her and who was waiting for her right.
laurynclark6 chapter 13 . 6/12/2015
Update! I love this story
Upsidaisey chapter 13 . 5/11/2015
Will this story be updated I have enjoyed the story so far
becksie chapter 13 . 5/3/2015
This is brilliant. Absolutely loved reading what is here so far, can't wait for the update.
Marie8563 chapter 13 . 4/9/2015
Oh mannnn! This is so good! Don't stop now! LOL!
TinaF chapter 13 . 4/9/2015
Loving it. Hope to read more soon.
spazmine chapter 2 . 4/8/2015
Hey, I'm just wondering if you are quiting the story or if you will be continuing it... I hope you contnuie the story I would love to see how you end it and if bella gets back home or if Jasper is able to break her. Hope to hear from you soon!
jk chapter 11 . 3/31/2015
she should have just told him she was digging through hs shit and a ring rolled under the bed...wouldn't that be easier then getting a ass beating later
jk chapter 7 . 3/31/2015
let me get this straight...what jaspers doing is ok because he mainly focuses on physcological abuse and well it could be worse
fuck that bella! run!
jk chapter 6 . 3/31/2015
your fucking kidding with this shit right? theres company! wouldn't that be the perfect fucking time to act out? and shes gonn behave wilst their out? ohhh I think not nows the time to get away bella!
jk chapter 4 . 3/31/2015
she was ready to die yes? so what does it matter if he puts her back in that room? hes getting exactly what he wants because shes so fucking weak...oh sit on your ass for 3 days and shes broken already...shes a total joke
she was in his office surely there was something shecould use to hurt him with...a fucking pencil she could jab in his neck...shes not even trying! this is your life bella! fucking fight for it!
shes a weak fucking joke and why your story sucks donkey balls
jk chapter 3 . 3/31/2015
that desert scene was so fucking so disappointed in bella its not even funny...why was she so thirsty? She said she was walking past cactuses! I mean for fucks sake the supposedely 23 year old has no fucking common sense at all! and she was wearing a dress right? surely she could rip some of it and fashion it to cover her feet for at least alittle padding...and she was in a car that drove her there right? surely you'd just follow the path already traveled...I mean you made her sooo stupid. I know children that would last longer then this stupid bitch
and if he'll never rape her then she really has not much to worry about...whats he gonna do? spank her, whip her take away her bed...that wouldn't be enough to break me...not even fuckin close. and I have a feelin that shes gonna end up with this douche bag...ya I think not ...mother fucker BUYS me and spanks me? He'd see someone hold a grudge like no fucking other.
can you at least pretend she has a very small brain...I mean anything...
she sees he has some original documents and she freaks out? stupid hoe don't you know what you can do with alittle money? hell I can get anyones birth cert if I want it. and she freaks...hes been incharlies house! like its some huge were KIDNAPPED dumb ass im sure they could get into your house. anyone could break into a house...doesn't take a special kind of person lol..
shes just so pathetic in this, I fucking hate it
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