Reviews for Axel's Birthday
xemnasevilperson chapter 1 . 5/23/2011
I love this so bad! I love how in-charachter everyone is in! I wuv saix. I'm weird I know, but I wuv him, and that is probably exactly what he would do in that situation. x_x
trap card chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I should totally be your editor lol.

"Nah, I couldn't even keep a weedalive," sighed Sora.

(As you can see, there needs a space there. How you managed to not see that in the first few lines of your own fanfic, I will never know. /shot loljk.)

"... He doesn't want that, so he has to cooperate—to an extent—whenever we want throw a birthday party."

(Whenever we want to throw a birthday party, basically.)

He grabbed a soda can and shook it furiously before pulling the tab, the can aimed Sora's face.

(The can aimed at?)

Roxas narrowed her eyes.

(I just about laughed my guts out at this. XD)

ANYWAY, I LOVE YOU. Everyone seems a lot more in character than most other fics, WHICH MAKES ME HAPPY. 8DD

Also, maybe it's just me, but I feel like you focused a lot on Riku and Roxas.

Despite not being part of my ~*prompt*~, I am very pleased. /shot

There's a lot of stuff I'd quote due to sheer LMAO-ing but there's too many. :D

Also, Sica writes a mean song.

Except it was kinda mean at some parts.

But still. XD

caitlinkeitorin chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
bahaha i wouldve thought that axel wouldve liked saix's present the best. a 3 day vacation? definitely thought axel would love that..