Reviews for House Calls
bichenta chapter 23 . 12/6/2020
Wow... The dreams in this chapter. Dawn. Simple scenes (and desires, like Kakashi's) are the best!
bichenta chapter 22 . 12/6/2020
Oh, this chapter is so lovely. Kakashi was so happy that he forgot he went away in the first place to forget his infatuation with Sakura

I like it when they fight and have fun with each other, like in the kitchen scene. And when they counted how many bandits they took down in Country Wind (I forgot to inckude this in my review in the appropriate chapter sorry hahahaha). But their relationship is so light and fun I love this fanfic
bichenta chapter 21 . 12/5/2020
Dogs. Being adorable. And playing poker.

I love you
bichenta chapter 20 . 12/5/2020
Own... Kakashi taking care of Sakura! YEAH!

I like Sai's tattoos! Great idea.

bichenta chapter 19 . 12/5/2020
I loved Sakura feeling Kakashi's face with her fingers. Loved, loved, loved so much thank you for this excelente KakaSaku
bichenta chapter 18 . 12/5/2020
I tottaly agree with you that Naruto's story has many problems. To be honest, I enjoy the gaiden arch, specially Zabuza, the Chunnin Exam and the beginning of Shippuden. Then the plot starts to get out of control. I don't like this many bad guys too, although I like Akatsuki, for me Madara is unnecessary. Obito must remain dead (really, what was Kishi thinking?). Orochimaru and Kabuto are interesting characteres and deserved more space (I say it a lot about Naruto's characters hahaha). But that is nice: there are a lot of interesting characters.

About the chapter: it' really nice! I love the way you are developing their feelings, the way they look at each other and start to perceive there something different... It's touching
bichenta chapter 15 . 12/5/2020
I think it's so realistic this fight between Sakura and her grandmother. It happens even in the best families haha it's nice to see that Sakura has a family
bichenta chapter 14 . 12/5/2020
the "rescue Sakura from the completely benign threat' moment is soooo cute! I love these fluffly little moments, they are so simple and make ny heart melt.
bichenta chapter 12 . 12/5/2020
I love Tenten and Chouji. They deserve a manga of their own

Also I love Kakashi taking care of Sakura. About dawn time, Hatake.
bichenta chapter 10 . 12/5/2020
I love Hinata as a clan leader! I don't believe Hinata is just a shy girl who can't even talk. There's a lot of girls that were shy in front of a crush, but they are more than that! I really apreciate it.

I agree with you about Itachi. He's a incredible interesting character. And Sasuke sucks.

About the chapter: yey! A girl mission. I'm anxious
bichenta chapter 9 . 12/5/2020
I loved the pop my back interaction! It's kind of intimate and fluffly. Thank you
Venelina chapter 38 . 11/30/2020
bruh I got dizzy from that last scene

damn that was intense

and too damn good to be true

I am glad I am 10 years late to the party because I can go straight to the smut now hehehe
Venelina chapter 35 . 11/30/2020
By this point, I am shipping Sakura with every male that flirts with her or just shows their respect and care for her lol.

Make it harem.
Venelina chapter 32 . 11/30/2020
As Shikamaru would say "this is such a drag", but I am glad you're building the relationship this way

A lot of fics go straight to the sex and there is no communication whatsoever and then everything is a fucking mess and a misunderstanding and there are big ass conflicts, but this is the mature and logical approach and I know now that the sex will be too intimate to handle because they're so established in their own emotions and feelings to each other.

It's good writing.
Venelina chapter 29 . 11/29/2020
I loved the Kiba-Sakura dynamic in this one and would love to see more of that and also her team's reactions ...
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