|Reviews for Rusted Wheel|
| C.S. Williams chapter 6 . 2/25
So, I know it's been a solid four and a half years since this story was posted, but considering how completely it sucked me in, it only seems fair to leave a note saying what I thought. Because, frankly, this story was on a level all its own.
First off, so perfectly in character! Putting aside how rare that is for fanfic in general, it's downright unheard of for Sam/Jack fanfic. And to be not only in character, but also amazingly well-written and inventive? Your story absolutely made my day. It captured my attention so completely; I should have been asleep hours ago, but I couldn't put it down. I can't even remember the last time I knew stopping a story before the end would make me actually anxious (what if Sam dies while I stopped to rest? How could I live with myself?!).
Anyway, I just wanted you to know, I loved it. A healthy dose of both realism and shippiness, which is just the way I love my SG-1 stories. I'm so glad I went randomly rummaging in the archives tonight; thanks, nostalgia! You're a fantastic writer with a gift for true storytelling, and I'm privileged to get to be even a miniscule part of it. Thank you for sharing, even if I discovered this about four years late!
| weezer42 chapter 5 . 2/15
wicked, wicked author...brilliantly written, tensely and tautly delivered...and the ending completely ambiguous...just wicked.
| LadyOthala chapter 6 . 1/31
Omg! Nooo! I hope there is a sequel to this story...
| Anna chapter 6 . 1/13
I don't know how many times I have read this fic. I love it every time! Sometimes I am convinced that Sam dies and other times I think she lives... How about a lovely little 'happy ever after' epilogue...please!
| mishy-mo chapter 6 . 11/28/2014
Wow that was brutal... Great but brutal.
| zeinazgh chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
amazing story but very sad ending, please write a sequel
| Anna chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Ok, I've just read this for the eight time (or about that) and I'm guessing that I'm not the only one who knows that this completely compelling and brilliant, well-structured, imaginative fic with unbelievably well drawn characters that slot so completely into the canon NEEDS A SEQUAL! I know you are writing other stuff now but please please please could you just go back and give us a happy resolution? Please?
| Teal'cIsMyHomie chapter 3 . 7/8/2014
Awesome story. Very well written! I love the part in chapter 3 when Jack finds out everything!
| Stacey's Universe chapter 6 . 6/28/2014
I have to admit that was a confusing story...
What exactly was the writing in the italics...?
When they got through the gate at the end where did they end up?
Just an ubrupt ending like that brings a lot of questions to my attention...
Maybe a few more chapters should be put on at the end?
| samantha-carter-is-my-muse chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
This is such a good story even though the ending broke my heart...
| RiddleWrappedInAnEnigma chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
| mmkbrook chapter 6 . 10/12/2013
In the end she dies. After all she went through she dies. You should have indicated that there is a character death.
| mmkbrook chapter 3 . 10/12/2013
Have to admit I don't like the way Jack is treating Sam. They are in this together, but are not acting that way.
| mmkbrook chapter 2 . 10/12/2013
Sam should have told Jack what happened to her. What a horrific situation.
| mmkbrook chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Interesting method of incarceration. If there is mining of naquada I would have to believe there is a Goauld in the woodwork. Very terrifying situation.
Good story, but to be honest gives me the willies.