Reviews for Rusted Wheel
FlittterKat chapter 6 . 11/2
This was a wonderful story. I'm so disappointed, there's no sequel. Did she die? Did they get the collars off and what happened afterwards? How did Sam and Jack react, knowing what they found out? Trotting off now to read more of your work. Thanks!
Guest chapter 6 . 11/2
I enjoyed your story so much! Is there a sequel? I'd love to find out what happens next.
Irishchicatee chapter 6 . 10/16
I mean what can I say. ... brilliant story
houghtam chapter 6 . 7/21
Nooooooo! You didn't just do that, did you? Oh, I am beside myself. Please tell me there is a sequel.
C.S. Williams chapter 6 . 2/25
So, I know it's been a solid four and a half years since this story was posted, but considering how completely it sucked me in, it only seems fair to leave a note saying what I thought. Because, frankly, this story was on a level all its own.

First off, so perfectly in character! Putting aside how rare that is for fanfic in general, it's downright unheard of for Sam/Jack fanfic. And to be not only in character, but also amazingly well-written and inventive? Your story absolutely made my day. It captured my attention so completely; I should have been asleep hours ago, but I couldn't put it down. I can't even remember the last time I knew stopping a story before the end would make me actually anxious (what if Sam dies while I stopped to rest? How could I live with myself?!).

Anyway, I just wanted you to know, I loved it. A healthy dose of both realism and shippiness, which is just the way I love my SG-1 stories. I'm so glad I went randomly rummaging in the archives tonight; thanks, nostalgia! You're a fantastic writer with a gift for true storytelling, and I'm privileged to get to be even a miniscule part of it. Thank you for sharing, even if I discovered this about four years late!
weezer42 chapter 5 . 2/15
wicked, wicked author...brilliantly written, tensely and tautly delivered...and the ending completely ambiguous...just wicked.
LadyOthala chapter 6 . 1/31
Omg! Nooo! I hope there is a sequel to this story...
Anna chapter 6 . 1/13
I don't know how many times I have read this fic. I love it every time! Sometimes I am convinced that Sam dies and other times I think she lives... How about a lovely little 'happy ever after' epilogue...please!
mishy-mo chapter 6 . 11/28/2014
Wow that was brutal... Great but brutal.

Excellent story.
zeinazgh chapter 6 . 10/26/2014
amazing story but very sad ending, please write a sequel
Anna chapter 6 . 8/24/2014
Ok, I've just read this for the eight time (or about that) and I'm guessing that I'm not the only one who knows that this completely compelling and brilliant, well-structured, imaginative fic with unbelievably well drawn characters that slot so completely into the canon NEEDS A SEQUAL! I know you are writing other stuff now but please please please could you just go back and give us a happy resolution? Please?
Teal'cIsMyHomie chapter 3 . 7/8/2014
Awesome story. Very well written! I love the part in chapter 3 when Jack finds out everything!
Stacey's Universe chapter 6 . 6/28/2014
I have to admit that was a confusing story...
What exactly was the writing in the italics...?
When they got through the gate at the end where did they end up?
Just an ubrupt ending like that brings a lot of questions to my attention...
Maybe a few more chapters should be put on at the end?
samantha-carter-is-my-muse chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
This is such a good story even though the ending broke my heart...
RiddleWrappedInAnEnigma chapter 6 . 12/8/2013
Cool concept!
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