|Reviews for The best marriage|
| Penelope Elizabeth Anne Snape chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Short but cute!
| secretone21 chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
the story is good. i would love to see what you come up with next to make it extremely awesome.
| SierryaSkye chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I thought this story was really cute. I like how you opened the story, with Jane panicking about Kevin walking out on her and then her trying to cover it up when he shows up. I don't know I just thought that was funny.
The story was well written, but I think there should be more detail between the dialogue, if you know what I mean. Just a few extra sentences describing and explaining the scenes and situations to help expand your writing. I hope I offered you some useful advice, if not you can just ignore me XD
Argh, sorry for writing such a long review...
Long story short: Awesome fic! 3
| Isabel well ya it's me chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I didn't feel like signing in! I LOVE your new story! Preeeeeeeeetty!