|Reviews for Something's Broken|
| kneekole chapter 11 . 3/6/2013
| Ninja chapter 11 . 2/25/2012
I cried soooooooooooooooooooooo much during this story. I mean I was balling my eyes out! The emotions were so well written, I loved this story so much and the ending was fantastic! I spent all night reading this! Great story. :D
| novellover chapter 11 . 9/4/2011
This is amazing and made me cry so much. Just thought you should know :)
| Ready Or Notxx chapter 11 . 8/22/2011
Guh. :D You have no idea how nostalgic this fic makes me. I had just joined te Saw category when you started it! (Or, somewhere along there. XD) Anyway, I loved it so freaking much! I'm glad you left it sort of unclear why Lawrence had to be at the hospital so much, so it's up for the readers to decide. Plus, I'm very glad Adam did NOT slit his wrists... Ooh, I love when he's suffering, but that would kill the poor dude. :) Anyway, fantastic fic again. :) Can't wait for your next!
| ScaryElwes chapter 10 . 7/22/2011
Okay, first off, I feel so incredibly stupid for not reading these two updates sooner. But, I'm also immensely relieved because I just avoided sufferring from Cliffhanger Syndrome due to the chapter before this one (although I did gasp aloud). So...HA.
Anywhoo, Larry needs to pull himself together (both literally and figuratively XD). I CANNOT believe it's taken him this long to realize that he needs help! He did it first with Allison and Diana, and now poor little Adam. And also, for being such an angsty little fellow, Adam sure did take charge by finally threatening to leave. Damn right. :D
And you can call me your little Adam any time you want... XD
| SilentDespair chapter 10 . 7/21/2011
First of all, sorry for anynomous review :D I just had to review, because...
Wow. Chapter was amazing like whole story. You're -seriously- one of the best (if not the best) AdamxLawrence-authors.
So keep going - I'll definitely read next chapters and all your other stories :3
| Sammy07 chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
OMG! That... That hurt and comfort was so freaking HAWT! And the way Adam tells Lawrence to come back to the house, pack his stuff, and leave when he's better is so sexy, for some reason. He's finally taking control! Maybe if he'd threatened Lawrence like this from the start, none of this would've happened. ...Wow, am I actually blaming ADAM for all this, rather than Lawrence? Well, I can't help it! Adam is hotter, so it's more fun to be mad at him! _ And Lawrence apologizing and begging Adam to take him back... AW! Adam is very forgiving, but I'm pretty sure he means what he says about tying Lawrence to the bed and setting the house on fire if Lawrence tries to go back to his self-destroying lifestyle. XD
| nicoleb chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
AWWW! This chapter was so CUTE and ANGSTY! I love how Adam stays with Lawrence when he's all doped up, only to tell him he's leaving him when he's better. Not that he doesn't have a right, of course. XD Besides, it really made Lawrence listen, if almost dying didn't. Now that he knows Adam's sick of his sh*t, maybe he'll stop being such an a*shole. We can only hope. _ We can hope for REALLY hot make-up sex later on, too, can't we? ...Yeah, I'm a pervert.
| GodGudKami chapter 10 . 7/12/2011
AW! We're Little Adams! _ That's so flattering! Mind you, if I were as hot as Adam, I'd be making millions being a male model and porn star, rather than sitting here reading all this awesome Saw fanfiction. XD That Friends tribute was cute, too, even though I've never really watched the show. I bet he was just itching to have his way with Adam when he saw how hot and angsty he was. _ And I love how indifferent and unforgiving Adam is at first, telling Lawrence to GTFO (not without reason), but then Lawrence breaks him down and makes him give him a second chance. Not that this fic should go any other way, of course. I can't stand unhappy endings. :( Lawrence is REALLY going to have to work hard to make this up to Adam, though. Maybe a few blowjobs will do the trick? XD
| Sammy07 chapter 9 . 7/12/2011
GASP! Lawrence is having a heart-attack! If this wasn't you writing, I'd be terrified he'd die. I know there are some authors on this site sadistic enough to end things like that. *Fumes.* But hey, ADAM doesn't know Lawrence is going to be okay! AW! He's going to be so worried! It'll be hot as hell! ...Is it weird that I get off on Adam's suffering? XD
| GodGudKami chapter 9 . 7/12/2011
AWWW! This was too freaking ADORABLE! Lawrence finally opened up a bit! Probably that hot sex in the last chapter shook him as much as it shook me. Sex is awesome like that. XD It's so CUTE how Lawrence says Adam could do better than him. Aw, don't feel bad, Lawrence; Adam's too good for everyone. You do come close to matching his hotness, though. Well, closer than most. _ ...Oh. You were talking about personality-traits? Well, those are less important (XD), but maybe if you stopped being such a neglecting d*ck, you wouldn't feel you weren't good enough for Adam? Not dying of that heart attack you're suffering from overworking might also help. Seriously. Don't die, Lawrence. XD
| nicoleb chapter 9 . 7/12/2011
*Sighs.* Lawrence, I thought you'd learned in the last chapter. How many hot sex-scenes is it going to take for you to get it? A lot, I hope, since it's more fun to read, but still. XD There's only so much Adam can take! And there's only so much Lawrence can take, hence the heart attack! Lawrence, you are so stupid! I hope he suffers a bit from this heart attack. Mean, I know, but considering how much he's made Adam's heart hurt... *Grumbles.*
| Sammy07 chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
Oh, my GOD! This chapter... This chapter... It... It KILLED me with its hotness at the end! I'm writing this review as a ghost now. _ I never get tired of Adam/Lawrence sex-scenes, and I don't think I ever will. Especially not when you write them. God... *Re-reads the sex-scene for the twentieth time.* XD ... OH! As for the rest of the chapter... XD Aw... Adam, don't blame yourself for Lawrence being so screwed up. Blame Jigsaw. We can totally understand why you didn't stop Lawrence from drinking back when you first got together; Lawrence would be so HOT when he's drunk, all groggy and depressed! _ Lawrence is being a real d*ck to Adam. He's lucky Adam's desperate enough and Lawrence is hot enough to get away with it. It's going to take a LOT of makeup sex for Adam to forgive him, though. A LOT. At least he returns to Adam straight away when Adam calls him, though.
| nicoleb chapter 8 . 7/12/2011
Oh, Adam... We all know you're only calling Lawrence home because you want him, not because you want the heater fixed. Stop lying to yourself and us! And LOL... Damn, Lawrence is screwed up with how he thinks of his work, isn't he? XD I guess it's his way of coping, but DAMN IT, Lawrence, you have a hot, sexy piece of ass waiting for you at home, and you keep ignoring it? What's WRONG with you? *_* And I love how Lawrence comes home to fix the heater, but to make Adam feel better when he's begging him to ease his loneliness. Ever think of going into therapy, Lawrence? You screwed-up . _ And I'm not going to go over how freaking hot that sex scene was, because I think we all know it was hot. Was it enough to defrost Lawrence, though? I doubt it, but it was still enjoyable. There's no such thing as pointless sex with these two. XD
| nicoleb chapter 7 . 7/12/2011
LOL! I love how Lawrence blames his inability to work properly on Adam. He's so abusive. XD You made Lawrence very IC in this chapter, too. "I thought you knew (I'd be a dick) when we got together, Adam." Damn it, Lawrence... Adam doesn't mind if you work, but if you work so much that you neglect him and don't give him enough hot sex anymore (XD), he draws the line, like any sane person would. Why is Lawrence yelling at Adam for "not supporting" him when he flips out and over-works, though? I mean, you can't expect Adam to put up with sleeping alone every night, Lawrence, you stupid man. :( I found it really adorable when Lawrence demanded if Adam was trying to guilt-trip him, though. He's just such a victim in this fic, isn't he? XD I'm getting pretty creeped out by Adam's constant hints of murder-suicide, too. I know you'd never make that happen, but it's still a bit scary. Cute, too, of course. Adam's suffering is always cute. XD