Reviews for Something's Broken
Sammy07 chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Hands up if you feel like hitting Lawrence AND Adam more and more with each chapter! *Raises hand.* XD Not that I ever get tired of the angst and denial, of course. It's so CUTE. And it's really sad how their relationship USED to be awesome, but now it's falling apart. AW! Don't worry, you two! It'll get good again! There's nothing hot, gay sex can't fix! XD And I sense some adorable hurt/comfort in the next chapter. I really can't wait for that, though I somehow doubt Lawrence is going to come around that quickly, am I right? XD
GodGudKami chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
ARGH! FINALLY, Lawrence is listening to Adam a bit! Sure, it'd be nice if he'd come home straight after the call, but he's a recovering alcoholic and moron, so we'll forgive him. XD Besides, a few hours allows Adam to get even more angsty and in need of hurt/comfort, which is awesome! _
GodGudKami chapter 5 . 3/4/2011
I know it was obvious already, but the "something broken" in this fic is Adam's heart, isn't it? And Lawrence's smartness, but that goes without saying. XD If you didn't always end your fics awesomely, I'd be terrified you'd kill off one or both of these cuties, instead of having them reunite in a passionate orgy after, like, a dozen chapters of denial. XD
GodGudKami chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
UGH! Lawrence... I have half a mind to set him on fire myself! He's such a work-aholic! I know he probably has a serious problem that needs psychology and Adam-sex to fix, but if he's not going to get those things, how will he ever recover? Lawrence, you're so... STUPID!
GodGudKami chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
Lawrence, you stupid... ARGH! Why is he always so STUPID? Adam keeps dropping hints about how lonely he is, but Lawrence just IGNORES him! Sure, I know there'd be no adorable angst and hurt/comfort if he didn't, but it's still so annoying! I'm amazed Adam's put up with it for all these years! *Rages.*
Sammy07 chapter 5 . 3/4/2011
AW! Lawrence the ex-alcoholic! But at least he was WITH Adam when he was drinking! Let him have a drink, Adam! He won't be able to resist when he's drunk, anyway. Wink, wink. XD Wow, Lawrence is really breaking down in this fic. I wouldn't be surprised if he went to a nut-hut, or got a heart-attack, or something. Stupid, stupid Lawrence.
Sammy07 chapter 4 . 3/4/2011
GAH! Lawrence is so STUPID in this fanfic, isn't he? I almost want Adam to tie him to the bed and set the house on fire! Or, maybe just tie him to the bed and have his way with him. Bondage is hot! XD Damn, Lawrence really doesn't get the hint, does he? He's tired and Adam-missing, but he still leaves to go to the hospital. Are you sure someone that stupid should be trusted around dangerous surgical instruments? XD
Sammy07 chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
Damn it, Lawrence! Adam is NOT a dog! You don't shoo him away when he wants attention! You throw him on the desk and have your way with him! This isn't rocket science, you know! Ugh. I have a feeling I'm really going to want to hit Lawrence several times in this fic. XD
nicoleb chapter 3 . 3/4/2011
AW! It's so ADORABLE how Lawrence dismisses Adam when Adam keeps trying to get attention from him like a whiny little kid! Well, the fact that Adam and Lawrence have been together for five years is enough, I suppose, but still! Lawrence, why are you so stupid? *Hits him.*
Jenny7 chapter 6 . 3/4/2011
Aww that was beautiful. I love when they cry together. :) Lawrence can be so oblivious sometimes. If I were Adam I'd probably punch him in the face and tell him to get his act together. Looking forward to the next update.
Ready Or Notxx chapter 6 . 3/3/2011
Daaamnnnn it... This fic is too damn adorable... I love this. Is Adam going to wake Lawrence up by leaving him or using self-destructive behavior? I can't wait to see what you do next. :D
ilokelolcats chapter 6 . 3/3/2011

this is awesome and so cute.

I hope that you update soon.
Ready Or Notxx chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
Hey, Stella! This is 00One X00 with a new penname! I'm really starting to feel bad for Lawrence... He's so adorable that you really just can't help it. Adam READS in his spare time! That's so cute! :D Please update! :D
Jiggysaw chapter 4 . 10/30/2010
Ohhh man, I'm really lovin' this so far! The plot is genius! ;) Can't wait for more!
Ready Or Notxx chapter 4 . 10/30/2010
Jeez, I thought Lawrence was being a bit of a douchebag with all the... not spending time with Scrawny Huggable Teddy-bear, but... I do feel a bit bad for him now. The two things that Adam needs to do: tie Lawrence to the bed and set the house on fire. Yeah. That would be just fine. XD

Once again, you are a writing genius, and if you do not update, I will put you in the bathroom.


Seriously. XD
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