Reviews for Inseparable
emowoods205 chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
(The beginning of this was so emotional I was crying and sniffling the fact that Naruto still held on was so heartbreakingly Beautiful...) Awee Naruto and Sasuke are so adorable telling each other they need the other... I was very surprised when Sasuke made the first move and also surprised that Naruto completely avoided the kiss issue for a year... (OH WHY OH WHY DID YOU KILL OFF GAARA! My heart is broken...) It was so sweet how protective and passionate Sasuke was with Naruto...Also it may have taken awhile but I'm happy they ended up together in the end. (Their so cute I hope hey lose their virginity to each other..) My one question is were they both 15 when they finally got together? (Darn it I really wanted a sex scene hey but at least I got myself a good hj scene You should make a sequel with sex and Mpreg involved!)
SexiiFoxii chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
Loved it! Wish that there was more though!
SairSeir chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Tht was a great story. I give u a job well done!
michy chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
sooooo hot! i love a pervy sasuke! hehe

i think you wrote sasuke's feelings quite well here
skyglazingMaro chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
oh I enjoyed it very much
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Nice story!
animecrazy479 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
this story is so hot .-.
pervyprincess chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Boy was that satifying! Sasuke sure has a dirty mouth on him! ;) i was getting a little hot there...

Good work!
Adrien chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
gosh, damn it, my head is spinning, and my eyes are loopy, and that only means: oh holy shit, that was too good to be true. And I mean it. Okeey, I don't see half of what I have written here, since I'm dead tired and the screen is small, to small for my taste. Night! Love it! Kiss and hugs from AdrienTheClown
josseline9090 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
WOW! xD

This is AMAZING and CUTE! x3

You did an Awesome job on the story! D

Keep up the Great work! :D
sasunaru2themax chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
SOOOO GOOOOD! I was a bit surprised at the time line. Two/three years there but it was amazing...and yummy...
Sesshysgirl06 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
aww i loved it! anbu are pervs! lol
SOng alto chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
The first part of your story is a bit confusing. It must be because you intended to impart drama to your story. the story's timeline is inadequate to express all the elements you included (powers out of control, antagonists, minor characters relationship to the main protagonists); all of which can be explored more. But i believe that the last part has redeemed it, and i am not indicating the sex that happened but by touching on the depth of feelings the character has for each other. Bravo for the description of love and awkwardness of first experiences! Thanks for the story!
Sighcoe chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Unbelievably hot! scorching one at that. Lolz...
Digimagic chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I love this. My favorite part had to be the prison scene. I just loved the emotion in this~. Lovely job~!
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