Reviews for Left Behind
Writer With Sprite chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Very good writing and well done. I am very pleased and I did enjoy the work. Thumbs up from me as well as a stamp of approval.
Angel-Sue76 chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
wow how can I have missed this one. The first part had me in hysterics and then suddenly the tone changes and it caught me totally off guard. That was brilliant and I loved it. Especially Virgil's amazing rescue.
JoTracy123 chapter 1 . 4/24/2011
hi again, this made me laugh about Virg forgetting about Gordon all because he was so worried about Alan, i also loved Virgil's reaction when he found out that he had forgot about Gordon.

i think that you should do a story on Gordon getting Virgil back for doing that to him,

nice work hon xxx
JOSIE chapter 1 . 3/13/2011
THIS IS GREAT HON, ALL WAYS WONDERED WHAT WOULD HAPPEN IF VIRG FORGOT GORDO AND MADE ME LAUGH TOO NICE WORK XXXXX
Lou-deadfroggy chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
Aww cute! I can't wait to see how Gordon gets Virgil back for leaving him behind!
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Used to watch the old series and this was the kind of thing i always wanted to see. Brilliant use of the brothers and the end bit is actually quite eerie. The misunderstanding and reactions of the entire thing were the best part but all of it was enjoyabe really
GinnyStar chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
This was good and the part of their mother coming in nice, I'm smiling and lol at the end!

"Well, I was always sure I was meant to copy my older brothers, being the youngest and all. Really Gords, just because I knocked myself out doesn't mean you have to compete."

As Gordon grinned at his only younger brother, Scott groaned.

"Please don't turn it into a competition, my nerves can't take any more."

Seconded!
MJ2901 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
This was a great idea for a story and very well written, from Gordon's frustration to the family's worry. Really enjoyed it and got a laugh out of Gordon's whispering.
Kyriebess chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Aww! I totally LOVED it! I'm so bookmarking this one. It gave me the downhill roller coaster chills three times! And I was so not expecting Gordon to be attacked. I thought John was being paranoid!

Absolutely loved it! What a great return from my vacation! And chances of a sequel? Something along the lines of revenge- or at least a 'get out of jail free card' for Gordon.

Excellent! Thanks for sharing this!
Agent Nova chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I loved this!

Poor Gordon, poor Virgil, poor Alan...poor Scott! I thought the description was perfect, and yet again, you've managed to get the personalities of each Tracy spot on. I was glad Jeff and the boys managed to keep an element of humour throughout the whole situation. The ending was really sweet, too.

Thanks for treating us to another fab story.

Sue.
whirlgirl chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Wow, Virge LEFT him, Pod and all! You have my permission Gordon, to prank him and Scott too, no holds barred and without retaliation for a year and a day!

I liked how being stuck in the middle of the ocean was merely vexing to Gordon. He felt safe enough in the sea, just forgotten. John on the other hand sees the immediate security risk to Gordon and the pod. Nobody even mentioned the Pod floating into the shipping lanes. How would I.R. explain That disaster? Virgil's horror at what he'd done and his rush to set things right was well portrayed.

For a minute there, when the Black Hull showed up I thought there might be an interesting Stingray tie- in to the threat. Not that the peril to Gordon wasn't bad enough! Nice twist at the hight of the rescue. I wonder, if Gordon hadn't been knocked unconscious, if he would have sensed that helpful presence too?

Nice little story. Any more coming soon?
Cutiepie2191 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
That was a great story. I loved the emotions between the brothers. Very nicely done.

:D
juniper294 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
that was so good! I love the story!
a pretty little liar chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Ha ha, who can out-do each other...

You know, I'm really starting to appreciate John. He had a lot of personality in this story, and that's something that we don't get to usually see. You know, I feel like a lot of authors think that because he's the most laid back of the boys, he's just so laid back that he doesn't have a personality. The eye in the sky, and that's all really.

Nice, nice. I love Gordon... ( I think I've said that in my review for your other story too), and I'm so glad that I had a nice Gordon story to come home to today. (Work was a... you-know-what!)

xo Malia xo
Silver Bee chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Interesting - you definitely got that shift from humour to something a bit darker. It's good to read something a bit different. Really entertaining too - lots of nice details and lively dialogue as always. Good work!

Don't think I can blame Gordon for this one and I refuse to blame Virgil, so it must be Alan's fault! Bee
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