Reviews for Breathless
Durrr chapter 15 . 4/2/2017
PLEASE COME BACK TO THIS STORY! :] I've been reading since you first posted it and I MUST SEE HOW THIS ENDS! :] I loved this last chapter and you left me with a huge cliffhanger! Please come back 3
Walkman100 chapter 7 . 7/8/2015
"Yea, yea Lord Grumpy, it's on the house." Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
June doesn't do anything for low prices, nevermind free...
BendingDreams chapter 15 . 6/16/2015
I stumbled across your story today and I am glad to read that you have come back to it. Hama needs to go! I hope the lady in the cave was Ursa. And Azulas come back will be fierce! Can't wait for more please continue !
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 15 . 6/15/2015
Damn, Hama is sounding like the Aatarverse's Hitler.
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 14 . 6/15/2015
Azula's not dead? So things are going to get ugly
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 13 . 6/15/2015
Uh... Oh...
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 12 . 6/15/2015
Oh damn!
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 11 . 6/15/2015
Somebody's going to have to fix all of this relationship stuff out
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 10 . 6/15/2015
And the plotters turn on each other. It was only a matter of time after all :)
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 9 . 6/15/2015
Boom. Katara is a badass!
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 8 . 6/14/2015
God, you are really screwing up all the canon relationships aren't you? I love it!
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 7 . 6/14/2015
Oooh, some partisan action. Hoping to spark a war between the nations are you Azula?
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 6 . 6/13/2015
Ah, exciting!
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 5 . 6/13/2015
I knew it was Hama. Nice touch
So while the plotters scheme the Gaang feuds regarding relationships. Not cool
Longclaw 1-6 chapter 4 . 6/13/2015
One, Azula and Mai, oh crap.
Two, this is like sitting poolside at freaking Melrose place!
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