Reviews for A New Start
budyserbabe chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
like where your story is going but chapters ain't long enough, and to much flashback sorry x
brokenlove81 chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
was the pack really lookin for her? did thy kno that she was preg? Peter and Char find her, but does that mean that jasper been lookin for her too? their not gonna be too happy when they hear her story.
AriesFireQn chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
Excellent story looking forward to reading more
mama4dukes chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
How does Peter know that Bells is his little sister. I need more now!
cosmoGirl666 chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
Great chapter! :)
fight-the-fire chapter 3 . 8/3/2010
this is a good story!

update soon (:
vamp1001 chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
its really good i really love it its good i hope u continue with writing it and updating it please continue with it
Nena1981 chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
i think it real good..this story has me excited...please finish it...maybe you should but the whitlocks POV..soon...cant wait until the next chapter
mama4dukes chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
Interesting read so far...Bella's had such an impossibly tough few years. I hope Paul kicked the crap out of Jacob! I'd love to read more.
cosmoGirl666 chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
Good chapter! :)
XxMzMaryJaneWhitlockxX chapter 3 . 8/2/2010
This is totally kickass she should use Meth to escape to keep her awake and blunts for the weed its way better lolz this is a good combantion and is bound to keep a user from addiction but she's been through worse and she'll make it that shit is pretty krazy i luv it! _ Update soon
cosmoGirl666 chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
Wow I can't wait to read more! :)
Reading is a Passion2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
I like the plot for this-keep going with it.
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