Reviews for Cave In
RedShoeParade chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
This was pretty good. Short but still good. While I think that the sub names would have made it easier to read it's still one of the better dub fanfictions.
themostdarkestheart chapter 1 . 8/28/2010
I really like to see something else for a change when it comes to Fanfics in YuGiOh 5Ds, something that is out of the ordinary, and your fanfic definitely qualifies for that. It seems to be a little bit short, but is nevertheless a very nice fanfic.

It is a first in that I have never seen a story deal about Carly and Greiger before and I like that Carly is weeping for him, feeling sorry, and seeing that they both have some point, in which they were alike, even if it was for s short moment.

The story is good, as it fills the gap about Greiger too - we have never seen him interacting much with the other DarkSigners, and he himself was a DarkSigner for such a short time that most people might have forgotten it already.

So, well done, I enjoyed this piece of writing.