|Reviews for Harder to Breathe|
| Sarah chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
where did you get that jaggie pic?
| Simply Marina chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Love it! It's awesome! I hope to see more stories from you!
| hundredtimes chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I'm really glad someone wrote this story. I was thinking something along the same lines during the episode. But I have to say when you were describing the placements of their bodies and things like that it was a little confusing. That's the only criticism I have though. Ive favorited this story and I really love it. I can wait to read more Jasper Maggie stories from you!
| Life's Crash Test Dummy chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I really liked this story.
It was a nice rewrite of the episode and I probably would have been overjoyed if it actually turned out this way! But, alas, it's Cartoon Network. What can you do, right?
I especially liked the almost kiss in the trunk and "positively swaying with overacted swagger." I officially won't be able to hear "My First Kiss" without thinking about Jaggie. Great work.
| ViciousAlice chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
That was a very cute fic! I enjoyed it.