Reviews for Draped in Wires
thedemonKZslayer chapter 72 . 5/3
Ahhhhh
I LOVE IT
PLEASE CONTINUE
sharingang chapter 72 . 4/10
Ahh I love this story so much! It's a shame you never got around to posting the rest.
WinXEd chapter 72 . 1/4
Woah, I really like your EdWin stories :D! May there be a chance that you'll continue this (and other :P) story :D? (I'm hoping so much that the "Updated: 2012" on top of my screen isnt true right now xD)
Whimsical Acumen chapter 3 . 1/3
I wouldn't quite call this a series of one-shots, per say, but regardless I really like this so far. I like how you've captured the essence of the characters which I so appreciate. :)

I see you've come to completion with this story, so I am excited to finish reading it myself, but so far, if I am to give any critique, it's that I really wish you would go through all these chapters and comb them with a Beta-reader to up the grammar and correct spelling mistakes and typos I keep catching. It's a shame, but I find them distracting.

Otherwise, I am fairly enjoying myself and am eager to continue reading!
Morning'sSong chapter 5 . 11/11/2015
AHAHAHAHA Ed broke his arm just like Al threatened to in the FMA bloopers XD It's too perfect
Q-A the Authoress chapter 72 . 9/10/2015
XD Can't wait for Nick to say something else.

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Q-A the Authoress chapter 67 . 9/10/2015
:D So cute! Nick is an adorable baby.

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Q-A the Authoress chapter 51 . 9/10/2015
So if Al looses his alchemy too he can just go becoming a wedding planner. This wedding would never have happened if it wasn't for him.

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Q-A the Authoress chapter 48 . 9/10/2015
Just don't let Ed build the roof. XD

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Q-A the Authoress chapter 38 . 9/10/2015
I thought it was 85%. Oh well, still works for me.

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Q-A the Authoress chapter 36 . 9/10/2015
Aw, I missed their banter. XD

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Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Barkeep is the best character so far. :D

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Yuyui Hime chapter 61 . 7/3/2015
Yesss, more Riza and Roy pleaseee
Yuyui Hime chapter 59 . 7/3/2015
"..carried his wife and shouting, like someone unexpectedly dying.."

Hahaha that is so Edward! Hahaha
Guest chapter 55 . 7/3/2015
Edward is such a loving husband! I'm so jealous at Winry~
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