|Reviews for A shot rang out|
| Checkerz chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
"You wouldn't understand you've never killed a man." "Yes I have." "Yeah but you've never pretend killed one."
| Alohagirls101 chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
this fic i love it! you should write the moment lassie finally does find out everything about shawn...i would love to read that and your writing is impeccable
| Umino Akiko chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
Oh dear god. I'm scared now because your back story for this nutjob seems totally pluasible and I'm adopted. thanks for giving me nightmares for the next month.
| Searching4sanity chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Wow. Totally amazing. I love how you made Lassie the narrativerather than Shawn, very creative.
| Harm Marie chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I liked this.
| Saravi Boo chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Really liked the story. _ I love to see Shawn shoot a weapon in any capacity. I like that you didn't have him entirely breakdown about having to shoot someone, but you still showed that he was strongly affected by it. One thing caught my attention: You were missing a word in this sentence: "Henry had probably taken his boy with him to the _ while Shawn was still in diapers." I assume the missing word is range or something similar but you might want to edit it because it really jarred me out of the story and it could confuse folks a little. Still, all in all a very nice story. Thanks for sharing it. _
| feyechelon chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Yes! I like when Shawn has a gun and knows how to use it. Henry would obviously have taught him. Great storyline.
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Very nice. They're were a few grammer errors, but nothing big. Stuff like, "For today, Carlton would let those questions o unanswered" It should probably be "go" not "o". The idea was really good. I wish you would expand on it. I like a serious Shawn and the fact that Carlton realizes that Shawn is just putting up a facade all the time.
| tiffaroolou chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Fabulous story. I know it's marked as complete, but I would love it if you continued it. Something like showing more of Shawn's reaction to having killed someone. Please? *offers you virtual brownies*