Reviews for Can I Have This Dance
Gymnastflip chapter 4 . 7/28/2013
Love it
Penghost chapter 4 . 10/7/2012
Thats the way it should have been...

Thanks for your time and a good scene!
Viera Grace chapter 3 . 1/27/2012
pro: it's cute, and more realistic than some other Harmony fics

Cons: You don't describe everything very clearly. You must be invisioning tons, but it's kind of hard for readers to picture it. Just maybe add some extra adjectives and you'll be fine. The grammar as well is kind of confusing, but I guess it isn't too bad. The one spelling mistake that really caught my attention was your incorrect 'especially'. Please spell check or send to beta before publishing. As the site actually states 'Hot off the Press' normally isn't too hot.

OverallReview: 6 1/2 (out of a ten for fanfics)
MoonyandProngs chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
That was great! Very sweet! I loved it!
AlicelovesJasperForever chapter 2 . 1/24/2011
happylady chapter 4 . 11/14/2010
Great post

Until next time

H Harmon chapter 4 . 11/10/2010
Finally, that is the way that it should’ve happened. Good story, thank you.
MLEetc chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
This is good, I want to see what else you write. Great starter for a story, but it is mostly dialogue and not much description or detail. And no plot. Also I don't think there needs to be so much emphasis on Harry and Hermione kissing, but that's just me. Trust me, this is honestly a very good idea for a story, and I love Harry/Hermione. Just a little bit of constructive criticism.
DANIEL chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
i dont understand y hermione and ron got together in the series...i thought it would be her and harry...anywatz good job
Scathach Warrior chapter 2 . 8/13/2010
The kiss at the end was exquisite.
Scathach Warrior chapter 1 . 8/13/2010
Really courage is not for everybody no matter what house.
Darkangelike chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
The story was nice, but like I said earlier, more details, feelings and thoughts will make it better.

As you will write, you'll get more experimented, I'm just stating it, don't be hurt or anything.

I think it fits the real story well, but it's not perfect yet ;)
Darkangelike chapter 2 . 8/8/2010
As I said, it's way too short, and it's a shame !

The story could've been great !
Darkangelike chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
It's a shame that you cut your phrases !

They're too short, I can't see anything but a story way too short.

You should take time when you write, go further.

It could have been way more interesting !

Well, for a starter.

It needs more feelings and thoughts.
badkidoh chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
I liked this story!
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