Reviews for Fictionista Wrkshp August to October 2010 Prompts
LisaLoo chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I love moony eyes. So sweet.
carebear309 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
So cute :)
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
There was a dreamy, sad quality to the prose


a little thud and


The romantic fire flares back up!


revrag chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
I swear my heart hasn't swooned so hard as it did when I read those final lines of this update! SERIOUSLY! How incredibly sweet and perfect was that!

You SLAY me. All the time! I just loved it so hard.

You're never gonna be rid of me. I will always love you. For serious. Unless you do something completely nuts like make Edward bone Haggard. js...don't do it. Like ever.

I'd still love you even then, but reserve the right to be very freaked. LOL
Sunflowerfields chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Aww, he is so in love with her that he can't be without her now; maybe they should move in together. The trip/vacation was just what their relatioship needed. It's going to be hard going back to the daily grind again but, they will have their memories to help sustain them during the boring day to day BS. Bella is thinking of Hawaii for a honeymoon destination isn't she? Already planning for a long term relationship at this point by the both of them means everything should work out just fine for them. These are the stories I love to read; they make me all 'gushy' inside.
ecxe chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
yesssss the saga continues

i would make a movie of every one of your prompts- itd be even better if they were all on their own hbo show.
annniej13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Gushy gush gush. How can they sleep apart? That's just impossible after what they shared in Hawaii.

Fantastic chap, dear. You're up late!



TrulyOutrageous chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Love it! I think it is very sweet especially the ending.
AzraCullen chapter 1 . 8/2/2010

the right mixture of fluff and the serious love is love to the point of pain stuff. LOVE it. xxxx
JLalways chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
So cute! I love this Edward. Glad he's still keen now they are back.
Dawnriki chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
Edward is so awesome.
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