Reviews for Finding Paradise
Guest chapter 2 . 7/16/2014
Amazing
Giratina Zero chapter 3 . 5/10/2014
As I promised I wll make sure this fic is brought to its full potential
Rose Tiger chapter 3 . 5/8/2014
Bummer. I'm gonna miss your work.
llazo4108822 chapter 2 . 10/18/2013
Ah I love this fanfic you should make more chapters of the to of them Naruto and Hinata please.
whiteshadow chapter 2 . 5/25/2013
well...that is one heck of a chapter i love it me wants more plizzzzzzz?and i love ur stories ,so touching
CrystallizedHina chapter 2 . 3/15/2012
I really like this story. I'm hoping you will continue it.
ultraguy7x chapter 2 . 1/19/2012
a wonderful bittersweet story. Update soon.
hinatasgreatestfan chapter 2 . 5/7/2011
Interesting concept here. Good start. If you need a beta for this or a new one for your other story, let me know. I've noticed several errors in both stories. I won't enumerate them here, but if you need a beta, don't hesitate to ask.
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 2 . 4/27/2011
Wow... Thos punishments were brutal, even by MY standards... Nice work.
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
Hmm... Not too shabby, DarkElite24. I must admit, I think I'm gonna like this.
tedlay chapter 2 . 4/16/2011
awesome story please please update asap
Gravity The Wizard chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
Sad Storyline!
Chewie Cookies chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
Damn, good stuff, m'friend!

Keep up the good work!
Shizuka-naru Goketsu chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Work on it, a lot.
Rose Tiger chapter 2 . 2/22/2011
Wow. Poor Naruto and Hinata.
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