|Reviews for Take over|
| Halo221 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I am very confused. Is this mis-classified? This cannot be a fanfiction from the Royal Spyness series by Rhys Bowen.
Also, with respect, I'd strongly encourage you to find a good beta. The errors throughout this one chapter were extensive, like to the point I questioned if English was your first language. You may have excellent ideas, but if you cannot convey them to the reader, what good will they be?
| AccountIsDeactivated111 chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
I really, really, really like this fanfic! It was sooo good but I couldn't believe it was the only fanfic! :)