Reviews for The Price of a Broken Heart
it's simply me n you chapter 11 . 9/5/2020
Wow! Wow! Wow!
What a powerful chapter!
cullenlover88 chapter 27 . 8/10/2020
wonderful story
JayNahNah chapter 6 . 8/7/2020
William is his son and William knows it...or heavily suspects.
LolaTheSa chapter 17 . 8/4/2020
Ok I can't read this anymore.

EDWARD NEVER had THE CHANCE TO GROW AND BE A FATHER!

You seem to be forgetting this.
LolaTheSa chapter 16 . 8/4/2020
The fuck? This quickly turning into one of those fics that make the girl the victim when she is the bitch of the story.
LolaTheSa chapter 13 . 8/4/2020
So wait.. you have Rose hospitalize Charlise for trying to buy her off buy don't have Edward feel no type of way on that?

Also all this is superficial, Bella met Edward by chance..THERE IS NO EXCUSE for keeping his son from him.
LolaTheSa chapter 12 . 8/4/2020
This is bullshit, so people close to him developed a relationship with his kid and doesn't tell him..

I would cut these people out of my life, fuck em.
Tracindalynn chapter 26 . 7/8/2020
I have read this fic so many times. I love it! Would love to read a future take about Will and his siblings. And of course Bella and Edward.
Thanks Tracy
friendsandlovers chapter 27 . 8/7/2019
Not sure how I never read this story till now, all these years later, but so very glad I did. Many thanks to both you and your team for writing this story. I so very much enjoyed reading it!
Noy chapter 14 . 7/30/2019
I completely disagree with what you made William say to his father. Edward has every right to be angry and to resent Bella. She may have suffer too but there is a major difference between her and Edward, in the end she had a choice, Edward didn't. It was her decision to leave him, it was her decision to never contact him about the fact that he had a son. As a matter of fact how can Edward ever trust Bella again ? Clearly she see no problem with taking this kind of decision without consulting or informing him, how can he be sure she isn't going to do it again ?
AlexBlakke chapter 24 . 7/14/2019
I don't know if you'll read this, but I sobbed reading this chapter; Carlisle is such a well written character, and following his arc has made me realise a couple of hard truths in my own life. I love how you be incorporated a blend of my favourite fanfic tropes while also including hard hitting bits of realism and drama, written so beautifully that a stoic reader, who goes through hundreds of fanfics a month, was reduced to a wailing mess. I honestly felt Carlisle's pain and regret, not to mention how torn Edward must have felt in his last moments. It was absolutely stunning, so thanks and well done. Xxx
pengirl25 chapter 26 . 6/20/2019
I’ve been reading this story for the past few days and have enjoyed it immensely! I love where you took the characters and what they had to overcome to get there. What a nasty Carlisle! Though he kind of redeemed himself at the end and I kind of felt sorry for him, it was too little to late for his son. You gave us great characters especially Will. Gosh I love that kid! Thank you for sharing your talent and time with us. I’ll be sure to check out your other stories.
heartstrings13 chapter 26 . 5/9/2019
Awesome
flanduslover1 chapter 27 . 2/5/2019
I fell in love with this story its is it wow...
Kesme chapter 27 . 12/18/2018
Why does Amelia talk like she’s 6...isn’t she 14? Will didn’t baby speak...
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