Reviews for Power Of The Soul
Guest chapter 14 . 6/7
Hey i just read both stories again for the hundreth time... They are both among my favorites on this site. I hope u will be able to add new chalters soon... Been checking once in a while to see... Also if u start a third story i would be really excited to see what u come up with. Hooe it nothing serious why u havnt been updating. Take care ;).
Guest chapter 14 . 2/15
I kinda don't like how much she is attached to Jasper u make it like she is Jasper's mate not Edwards
IoanaP chapter 14 . 2/9/2016
Wow, hope that you are able to finish the story,i love them bouth.
twimom1960 chapter 14 . 1/2/2016
I hope this finds you well and that your creative instincts have been on vacation. I would so love to see this finished but I understand that life gets in the way. Have a very happy New Year
mommakat chapter 14 . 9/9/2015
Hi! I hope this finds you well and happy :)
I have just finished both stories and wanted to thank you for sharing them. Having read straight through from the beginning, I could see the steady improvement in your story-telling. You started strong and just kept getting better. I know it's been awhile since you've up-dated. I hope it is nothing worse than writer's block. I hope you continue but even if you don't, thank you for what is already here. It's a great story and you are worth the wait!
davidahare chapter 14 . 8/8/2015
I hope that this story is updated and finished. I also feel that a sequel should be written.
Guest chapter 11 . 7/21/2015
I really hate how you pitrade Renne. If you put that she was forced into loality to James didn't why not make it so that Bella is still mad but is willing to forgive her. Hell, you made Bella forgive Jacob after the way she treated her and but noooo not her own mother. She didn't even have any control over her actions and she was upset and ashamed of her own actions even if they were uncountable. you just have Bella hate hate hate! Like how can someone with so much hate be pure as you say? Someone who is so called pure in the soul wouldn't be able to have some much hate in their heart, they are willing to forgive but no you suck
Diiawb2 chapter 4 . 2/21/2015
I am really enjoying your sequel! It's really wonderful. I hope that you are able to finish it and that you are able to start the third installment that you were talking about. :) Keep up the terrific work! It shows in your work how much of your time and talent that you put into it.
jdc0630 chapter 14 . 11/10/2014

It will be driving me crazy until I can read the ending of this...which I imagine is going
to mean the end of Volturia...Aro !

I DO FEEL she is ignoring Edward a little too much !

Anyway, hope to hear from you there is more on it's way !

Thanks muches for sharing this part with me...anxiously awaiting the rest ...xxxxx

Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
Guest chapter 14 . 9/7/2014
I like vampire Bella.
Guest chapter 2 . 9/6/2014
I like pissed of Bella
Debbie Hicks chapter 14 . 8/23/2014
Vampire Slayer
then I sensed each but as very all of them then were not human I bneed to hunt them Down then Drain them from their corpses nothing will i' Bellona your Creator awaits then Fled then flew in a screeching newborn rage of terror and Atttaccked them with a violence was very too much many more then all of the Sudden began drinking the Sweetst but the Walloping the fullest and then all of the Sudden a very violently but hard-crashing SNAP I Dropped as very much many more was hissing and growling then three were left Dinner TIME! Their wioth their screams were Silenced I had sided with the Interorganic Snake Cursed me and and swirled who are you I am Satan your creator you will pay a pardon you have Killed them you are a Child and a daughter of Dracula your true father a devil of Satan then it hit me you are Forever a Vampire Slayer cursed with bitter immortality and truest eternal youth and life and join with me I will clothe you suddenly I was transed into a fearsome being with holographic wing s flapping on my back and and all of the sudden I was a murderer and my own thoughts were scrambled and then a RIP Was clothed tho the both BELLA It's Bellona now Queen of the night and darkness and purity my own Crimson eyes blinked open then it happened A blast flashed onto us with the Both with the Allies with myself was Burst freed usa with as very as all of them and then a sudden Scream from us but lost our unification of our each both and then with their own women as with their Children still protected within themselves then Not THIS TIME HERE IS MY PLANETASRY POWERS BETAZED CRYSTAL POWER! MAKE-UP! My own nails blasted blue then a very violently but powerful transformation a signal from the cosmos then grabbed my planet lip rod and transformed into a very powerful but leaner but Athletic/Fit but strong sailor guardian with new but grown hair with bangs my own eyes went golden with their as punishment began hunting animals but Maria was Captured with the two with the three tried to escaped and forced to watch but they were next to be killed I am the pretty suited guardian of the SOUL! And the MIND! On the behalf of the planet BETAZED! I Am the Swordswoman guarding the GREAT FIRE! I Stand for love and JUSTICE! I Right wrongs and triumph over EVIL! That's means YOU! Negatrash! The others stood in battle uniforms they took as very all of us from around the world then all the sudden their hybrids and children were birthed differently it was too late we were with the blood of the planetary gods then the Volturi guards took the bodies Masters we present to these bodies but they have Resurrected but risen from their coffins we destroyed them the very as all of the Covens from around the world with them as well then it was too late were Murdered and Destroyed then all of the Sudden the Scream was back but Cursed them with the turned with the released as Infertile vampires suddenly broken free as Volturi vampires the bodies were buried with the murdered the other hybrids were blessed but grieving then with as all of the other hybrids adopted but violently as the Kindred with the Interplanetary Lycans as the Gods of tomorrow science animal life and Evolution but the Volturi were punished by ourselves and declared the bodies were burned and cremated but banished as all of them to America we powered down as ourselves looked more strong with the other turned as all of them.
Anonymous chapter 14 . 8/3/2014
Why?! Why did you leave me hanging like this? WHY?! I thoroughly enjoy this story and your other story. I think that you are a very good writer and that you should continue.
Guest chapter 14 . 7/29/2014
I like this Bella,But why is it that hunting or torturing someone makes Bella and Edward try to jump each others bones
Guest chapter 7 . 7/28/2014
Vanilla Twilight-Owl City

Saw movies?I have know idea what that is
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