Reviews for The serpent and his snake
Guest chapter 4 . 6/8
Hmmmmm... Nah, I'm out... See you in hell!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/8
Hmmmm... Nah, I'm out... Goodbye! See you in hell!
idk chapter 14 . 9/27/2015
WWWWWHHHHHHYYYYYY WWWWWWOOOOOOUUUUUUULLLLLLDDDDD YYYYOOOOOUUUU CCCCCRRREEEAAAATTTTEEEE AAAA PPPPLLLLLOOOOTTTT HHHHAAAANNNNGGGGEEEERRRRR TTTTTTHHHHHHHEEEEEEEENNNNN SSSSsTTTTTTTTOOOOOPPPP?
rowenasheir chapter 14 . 4/4/2015
has anyone taken over this story
KrystalMyashi chapter 12 . 8/4/2014
And what reasoning exactly do you have for Harry to be a "Dominant", when he clearly isn't one? We need a reasoning, not just some cheap-ass "He's dominant and that's that". Because really, you're just adding more and more nonsense and "Plot twists" that are really just bothersome. .
Lavonya chapter 2 . 4/24/2014
Weird...
Lavonya chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Interesting...
Guest chapter 7 . 1/3/2014
Type your review for this chapter here...
KatzeIason69 chapter 14 . 5/21/2013
well it's a shame:( that you won't keep it going until you finish it ; it was such a sexy story :). but if you keep it going or not and some one adopts it let me know please.
i like big cocks chapter 14 . 3/29/2013
i find it very nice, id like to be in harry's place
tazztazz chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
good story shame that you are not continuing the story as i would have liked to see where it went but oh well it was a brilliant story anyway.
jgood27 chapter 14 . 10/14/2011
Love this story and and I hope someone adopts it so I can read more
musme chapter 6 . 9/19/2011
I like it
xxdoctormorphinexx chapter 14 . 8/30/2011
well i am quite sad that you will not be continuing this story, but im sure you have plenty of reasons why you can not continue with it. however, if i may be so bold, i would love to have opportunity to continue your story. if you pick me as a candidate for the opportunity to be the 2nd author of the story i would love it if you could give me a note telling me what you might have in mind on how to continue the story. or if i were to change up a few things it would be great if you told me things you would no way want changed.

thankyou very much, and i would love to hear back from you...

Always,

Van
sousie chapter 13 . 8/25/2011
amazing update soon
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