Reviews for The serpent and his snake
rowenasheir chapter 14 . 4/4
has anyone taken over this story
KrystalMyashi chapter 12 . 8/4/2014
And what reasoning exactly do you have for Harry to be a "Dominant", when he clearly isn't one? We need a reasoning, not just some cheap-ass "He's dominant and that's that". Because really, you're just adding more and more nonsense and "Plot twists" that are really just bothersome. .
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KatzeIason69 chapter 14 . 5/21/2013
well it's a shame:( that you won't keep it going until you finish it ; it was such a sexy story :). but if you keep it going or not and some one adopts it let me know please.
i like big cocks chapter 14 . 3/29/2013
i find it very nice, id like to be in harry's place
tazztazz chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
good story shame that you are not continuing the story as i would have liked to see where it went but oh well it was a brilliant story anyway.
jgood27 chapter 14 . 10/14/2011
Love this story and and I hope someone adopts it so I can read more
musme chapter 6 . 9/19/2011
I like it
xxdoctormorphinexx chapter 14 . 8/30/2011
well i am quite sad that you will not be continuing this story, but im sure you have plenty of reasons why you can not continue with it. however, if i may be so bold, i would love to have opportunity to continue your story. if you pick me as a candidate for the opportunity to be the 2nd author of the story i would love it if you could give me a note telling me what you might have in mind on how to continue the story. or if i were to change up a few things it would be great if you told me things you would no way want changed.

thankyou very much, and i would love to hear back from you...


sousie chapter 13 . 8/25/2011
amazing update soon
KarmaLovingFanfic chapter 13 . 3/21/2011
I like this story,
Books.R.Magic chapter 13 . 2/27/2011
This is so good at the moment!

I wonder how they're going to try to get Harry back (Fingers crossed that they fail).

It'll be interesting to see how Voldemort deals with Harry not being able to have kids in this strange dynamic :). I hope he doesn't plan to add anyone else to it or anything.

It's good that you can clearly see that he does care for Harry as well.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

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