Reviews for The serpent and his snake
Guest chapter 2 . 4/26
This chapter is very good and so well-written...I don't know why but it reminds me of the Disney animated film, the Jungle Book where a certain crafty, sly, sneaky large serpent begins to toy with and manipulate the boy before managing to hypnotize and lull him to a deep silent slumber and into his coils.
angelfromheaven26 chapter 1 . 4/25
Ho, ho...this chapter reminds me of a certain 1967 animated Disney film where a young orphan jungle boy encounters a certain sneaky, sly serpent the second time after being hoisted up in his coils.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/8/2016
Hmmmmm... Nah, I'm out... See you in hell!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/8/2016
Hmmmm... Nah, I'm out... Goodbye! See you in hell!
idk chapter 14 . 9/27/2015
WWWWWHHHHHHYYYYYY WWWWWWOOOOOOUUUUUUULLLLLLDDDDD YYYYOOOOOUUUU CCCCCRRREEEAAAATTTTEEEE AAAA PPPPLLLLLOOOOTTTT HHHHAAAANNNNGGGGEEEERRRRR TTTTTTHHHHHHHEEEEEEEENNNNN SSSSsTTTTTTTTOOOOOPPPP?
rowenasheir chapter 14 . 4/4/2015
has anyone taken over this story
KrystalMyashi chapter 12 . 8/4/2014
And what reasoning exactly do you have for Harry to be a "Dominant", when he clearly isn't one? We need a reasoning, not just some cheap-ass "He's dominant and that's that". Because really, you're just adding more and more nonsense and "Plot twists" that are really just bothersome. .
Lavonya chapter 2 . 4/24/2014
Weird...
Lavonya chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
Interesting...
Guest chapter 7 . 1/3/2014
Type your review for this chapter here...
KatzeIason69 chapter 14 . 5/21/2013
well it's a shame:( that you won't keep it going until you finish it ; it was such a sexy story :). but if you keep it going or not and some one adopts it let me know please.
i like big cocks chapter 14 . 3/29/2013
i find it very nice, id like to be in harry's place
tazztazz chapter 14 . 2/9/2013
good story shame that you are not continuing the story as i would have liked to see where it went but oh well it was a brilliant story anyway.
jgood27 chapter 14 . 10/14/2011
Love this story and and I hope someone adopts it so I can read more
musme chapter 6 . 9/19/2011
I like it
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