Reviews for The Natural Choice
InlovewithJake chapter 18 . 4/30
Why has nothing been said about Edward or their past relationship? Not one word? No jealousy or anything for that matter!?
Guest chapter 8 . 4/26
Update please you've been doing story for like 4)rs please finish soon
Guest chapter 3 . 4/26
Update please thisb as been going on since 2010. Surely you can finish it xx
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26
Update please sooon
Jinx095 chapter 20 . 4/21
Such a great story! I'm sad to see it end but I loved reading it and the ending was fantastic!
1WhoLoves2ReadAlot chapter 20 . 4/20
Awesome story! Love it!
mayfairmarybeth chapter 20 . 4/18
Really enjoyed the story...great job...maybe next story could be Paul and bella or Seth and bella... I would love to see what u could put together with them!
Guest chapter 5 . 1/18
Only a moron wants to have a bay when they are 18 or so.
The obsession with kids is really creepy. How about they get to know each other a little?
Being horny is one thing the rush to have kids feels contrived.
Guest chapter 3 . 1/18
This is just too...saccharine. Sickly sweet.
There's just nbo story here. nothing to get attached to.
Jake is sneaking into bellas bed and bella sleeps so soundly she doesnt know there is a huge dude in her little bed? Thats just weird
Guest chapter 2 . 1/18
Jake is 6 ft 10 inches not 6'2" or 6'4". Get the details right.
He is supposed to be almost 2 feet taller than bella at 5'2" an is supposed to tower over dedweird at almost 6 feet. He is supposed to weigh almost 240lbs of solid muscle. GET THE DETAILS CORRECT or stop.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/18
I think this went too fast. too much talking, no details and the pacing is ridiculous.
Its not aterrible idea but you need to flesh it out expand the world a little.
BTW imprinting is usually 2 ways the imrintee feels it as well..
plainjanedee chapter 19 . 10/29/2014
This story is funny and sweet. I hope that you do come back to finish someday, but I've enjoyed the ride so far.
ram chapter 19 . 9/16/2014
More please? :)
Amu4ever chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
Ohh...wonder, what Jake has in mind...:)
Guest chapter 19 . 6/21/2014
cmon chapter 20
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