|Reviews for What's Owed|
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/2
What the hell is "wo"?
| Harriverse chapter 8 . 3/14
I was surprised that more people weren't found to be haunting Harry, like Remus and Tonks, his mother and father. That would have made his level of angst that much more understandable for its pervasiveness. And maybe driven home the extent of Harry's situation to Snape? But since you have already finished this fic, who cares, huh?
| Dimplz chapter 33 . 1/10
This was a fantastic story!
It reminds me of the very first Severitus story I read, which was also probably the second Harry Potter fic I'd ever read, that is still a favorite of mine called A Year Like None Other. I love Severitus fics but rarely do you see the inclusion of Draco in the family dynamic (A Year Like None Other has that) and that is a shame. I was so glad you included him in the family. The writing was superb as well as the plot. I am SO GLAD you did NOT retell the 6th/7th year plot but instead wrote something original (THANK YOU!)!
Please tell me you are working on a sequel? There were several plot threads that could continue such as Lucius's escape, Harry's illness and how it affects his life/career choices and his relationships (i.e. Hermione) and does he ever heal, Draco's surprising relationship and what happens to them, who was Snape's lost love, etc. I hope you consider writing one!
Thanks for writing!
| Comrade'sRoza chapter 33 . 11/6/2016
Loved it! It was brilliant!
| Cztelnik chapter 33 . 10/25/2016
What an incredible story. You did the ending right too. Lots of different creatures and people starred in this fic and the changes in the story I liked better than the original. Even with all the deaths. Draco and Harry's eventual friendship, brotherhood with Snape as their father is all one could ask for. I really liked how Snape treated them both as his sons, most stories have him ignore Draco to favor Harry and that doesn't jive with his being Draco's godfather.
Yes really enjoyed reading this fic. Kudos.
| SmoulderS chapter 33 . 10/22/2016
Wow, this was such an amazing story, thank you for sharing! I especially liked the way you seamlessly transitioned Harry and Draco from enemies to brothers.
| Lady Julie Snape chapter 33 . 7/28/2016
I wish I had the words to express how much I enjoyed ... No, enjoyed is not the correct word; the only one that I can think of that suits this story is love. I cannot tell you in simple words how much I loved this story.
I have always been a major fan and supporter of Severus Snape and Harry Potter father/son stories. One as exquisite, as beautiful, as gorgeous as this is a rare, rare find. I have spent the past two days reading this story from start to finish and I can't tell you what it has done to me. I have smiled. I have laughed out loud to the point that my mother and family stare at me curiously. And I have cried. I have cried to the point where I was biting my lips to contain the sobs building in my chest.
I never expected to fall in love with this story but I think that it has become my absolute favourite piece of literature on the Internet. This story was filled with love and forgiveness and it showed how people can and do change if given the chance or shown the slightest bit of compassion. Severus and Harry stole my heart and so did Draco. I must admit that I was quite wary when Draco entered the story. I'm a sucker for Severus/Harry father/son relationships and don't like when they have to share with other characters. But Draco grew on me. I even liked the dynamic that developed between him and Ron.
I don't know if you still read the reviews to this story but I hope it brings you some joy knowing how much you have touched my heart and soul. I can't think of a higher compliment than saying that I wish THIS story had been the true canon of the Harry Potter series.
Thank you. Thank from the bottom of my heart for making me laugh and for making me cry and for reminding me that love and forgiveness truly can conquer all.
| Guest chapter 33 . 2/18/2016
Oh my gosh. This. This was wonderful. All the emotional ups and downs and wow. I loved this. I would love to see a big sequel. This story was so well written and I loved the dynamic between Snape and Harry.
| vgriffin4 chapter 33 . 2/17/2016
Excellent story had me from the start. Thank you for the entertainment and the chance to read your work. Your very talented.
| silverangel116 chapter 9 . 2/16/2016
Great story I love it
| Amber Ice Fox chapter 33 . 1/27/2016
This story is awesome! I had a blast reading it!
| scgaraycochea chapter 33 . 1/6/2016
Hi, I really enjoy this fic, it is wonderfully writen.
Thank you for a beautiful story and for share it with us.
| FantasiaPiccolo chapter 33 . 12/25/2015
I'm sorry for a single review, but in my defence, I read the whole story in one go and did not wish to interrupt the flow. I loved the story. Excellent work. It was very well written.
| AmazingHefi chapter 33 . 12/4/2015
At the begining, I was thinking you'd turn Harry and Snape into Stus. Now, I relish in how well written and thought out this fic was. I loved every single line and moment of What's Owed- all the humor, romance, familial love and a show that not all Slytherins are bad (even if we are a bit devious and have a bit too strong a sense of self-preservation). And, while I somewhat hated Snape (as a person) in JK's books, I love him in this one. I love Harry and Draco's relationship, Harmony ship... Well, I should've said that I love everything in this and left it at that.
| whitehound chapter 23 . 10/18/2015
The Creeveys certainly are squealers...