|Reviews for Burn It|
| HelentheTrueHylian chapter 1 . 8/7
This was so beautiful and realistic, and well-written too! I love the trust you built around the two of them
| vampoof94 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
ahhh i loved it haha! XD i totally laughed with roy!
| woooo chapter 1 . 1/26/2012
great story! its so sweet! keep writing! :)
| ason chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
Very good job with the emotional atmosphere of the story. I always love reading stories that give insight into scenes that we don't actually get to see. The only thing I would suggest, and it's a small, petty detail, is that you don't every put ice or ice cold water on burns. Cool water is always best.
Again, excellent story.
| LeeYumLevi chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
i loved it!