I hate your Bella t he moment. She's out right cruel. Jacob irritants the heck out of me most stories but hes grinding my last nerve in this one.

I hate the games these two seem to be doing all the time.

I no shes upset with Edward but i think she is taking this a bit to far. Its about time Jacob was made to move on.

This was great! Thank you for sharing your story with us!

I don’t like where this is going. Just when they were getting to a good place something happens.

I am a beautiful, and I will be able To get the

You probably don’t read reviews anymore. But if you do. I was wondering what are the ages of Bella and Edward in this story?

I think Sir Riley is behind everything.

I don’t like the fact Edward almost cheated on Bella. Bella is being a little bitch to Edward. I wish Jacob would just disappear. He is not my favourite character in the twilight story or in fan fiction. I just hate the triangle stories.

Are we just going to pretend chapter 7 wasn't a rape scene

Terrible.

Oh my god I love it I just can’t up crack up laughing at all the confusion poor Bella lol

Thank you for sharing your writing talent.

Ugh, this is bad.

loved your story