|Reviews for Human Elemental|
| LoveCake chapter 15 . 7/1
I love the story, and the characters development - but I just couldn't finish it. You are a GREAT writer and very creative, I just couldn't get past all of the "f bombs" used - for me it just took away from the plot and the story. I don't mean this as a flame review - I think you are a great writer. I'm sorry.
| iluvfangs chapter 3 . 6/10
Just found this and LOVE IT!
| iluvfangs chapter 1 . 6/9
Your youtube video brought cant wait to reas it
| kantorkan chapter 36 . 5/7
Why should they keep practicing since they are vamps once they do something right they should remember it.
| kantorkan chapter 27 . 5/6
Don't understand why they would act like they hated each other makes no since.
| kantorkan chapter 22 . 5/6
kind of dumb,after all of these years she should have more control over her powers,but i figure this is your way to get her changed.
| kantorkan chapter 21 . 5/6
Dumb shits, leaving her to do the dirty work.
| Guest chapter 26 . 4/13
Everything is just so rushed and choppy. Very unappealing for the reader. The story has potential, but you just can't seem to find an appropriate rhythm between details, flow, and format.
| Sassyvampmama chapter 41 . 4/13
Awesome take on the Twilight universe, I can't wait to read the sequel. Thanks for sharing.
| B4bidden.Products chapter 41 . 4/4
Absolutely friggin this story. U r 1 amazing writer xo
| Ira Bell chapter 41 . 3/17
I thought Peter n Ben died for a moment
| kantorkan chapter 14 . 3/3
Chapters are too short.
| kantorkan chapter 11 . 3/3
Stomped into the house not stopped.
| kantorkan chapter 6 . 3/3
Common is that how they say come on down under ? you will be killing OFF not of the Pixie Bitch and Fuckward before the story is over ,right?
| kantorkan chapter 1 . 3/2