|Reviews for The Break in the Wall|
| too-much-inspiration chapter 1 . 1/20
I always thought it was a bit strange that they never really show this sort of scene in the canon. Thank you for posting your thoughts on it.
| A chance to fly chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Poor Zuko...First having to tell the story (well, sort of) and then a nightmare...:(
This was really good, it could have been a part of the official series! :)
| Daisainan Neko chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Aw that was sad! Very strong. Good job!
| Automail-gHost chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
will u write a sequal? ow pweezes.
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Aww, Zuko is so complicated and sad, I just wanna hug the poor guy.
| roxashasboxers chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
This is probably the most in character telling of Zuko's scar I've come across. I really like that Toph had to persuade/force him into telling the others, and the way he kept his explanation vague. It's what I would expect from him, rather than the full confession/group-therapy thing that most fics include.
I also like that Katara left, because it seems like something she would do. Her pride just wouldn't allow her to admit she was wrong to the others, but her compassionate nature would mean she felt guilty, and so I find it fitting that she would need some time alone. The parallel with both her and Zuko leaving so abruptly was a nice touch as well.
Basically, you did a brilliant job with characterization and that's always awesome :)
| Lolcano chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
aawwww... so cute! good work! :)
| jessica-semnadaprafaze123 chapter 1 . 5/20/2012
oh sweetie, this's beautiful.
| Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 12/19/2011
I like how you had him tell it. I find it so OOC when someone basically copy/pastes how Iroh told the story, Zuko would never give details freely, unless maybe it was Toph, and even then he'd give the bare bones of the story. He's like Toph in his hatred of pity. This was really good, and well done.
| vikky-leigh chapter 1 . 11/24/2011
For god's sake, somebody hug the kid.
| S2 Intelligence chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
wow, this was one story that really felt canon. Zuko still not giving everything in, but still. I hope you write more stories like this )
| tomboy 26 chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Sigh .. Zuko's story is so sad but I guess that's why he told only Toph .. she wouldn't smother him or try to cheer him up.
| pumkin98 chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
I still think that Ozi should have thought that through. I feel sorry for Zuko...I just hope Toph wont punch me. Good story. Im putting it in my faves it was that good.
| Lucrezia6565 chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Sad and heartbreaking and oh-so-beautifully written.
Definitely a fav. :)
| PiWrite chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
that makes me sadness :)