Reviews for Hormones
1sunfun chapter 3 . 1/15/2013
xX-KiryuSama-Xx chapter 3 . 1/20/2012
I love this story! It's so funny and I love cloud! Awesome job:)
MalikaiDragonSlayer chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
"Oh nothing… I just wanted to see what my last name would change to when we get married, but I'll settle with being called Mrs. Sephiroth or you can take my last name and-Sephiroth eyes widened at the blond before he let out a loud and frustrated yell, which had yet to cease the blond's rant about them having a large wedding with lots and lots of pancakes since he was a huge fan of them." LMAO
yaoilover123 chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
this story is so good i hope you update it soon so i can see what happens next
DoctorGleeWolf chapter 3 . 8/30/2010
please update soon! D
Dragi chapter 3 . 8/20/2010
poor sephiroth, cloud sure is exspensiv lol. i am sure when sephiroth goes off on a misson, he gona need someone to baby sitt cloud so he wont even get more repair bills

genesis: sephiroth are you sure leaving cloud alone while you are on a misson

Sephiroth: why should there be any problems?

Genesis: just thought he didnt go around ordering something and put the bill on you.


Genesis: you okay?

Sephiroth: you baby sit cloud, bye

Genesis: O_O

sorry was hard to resist XD

wonder how cloud's bday gona be, and if sephiroth ever knew he said yes to all that XD hope cloud took it all up on a tape as proof looking forward to read more :D
GnarwleeSunn chapter 2 . 8/12/2010
aww! too sweet! especially when Cloud said that since Seph made pancakes for him that theyll always be good ))
Soon-to-be-Baby-Ayatane chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
Haha, this fic is so cute! :3 I laughed for a good five minutes when Cloud attacked Sephiroth and Sephiroth just kept on talking. LULZ

Poor Seph, he's like the lady from Hercules when she sung that song about not saying she was in love. xD "If there's a price for rotten judgement, I guess i've alread won that." That song explains him so well in this fic, don't you think? Hehe.

Don't ever stop writing!

Your loyal reader,


P.S: Sephiroth got bitch-puched! :O
RikkuFukaimori chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
Awesome xDD That's all I can say. Not because I don't want to, but because I have twenty minutes to get to class .;;
Tobirion chapter 2 . 8/9/2010

xXxXx chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
Awww lol thats cute XD Ummm update oon :)
Dragi chapter 2 . 8/9/2010
rofl that was a hillarius ending XD really liked it :) wonder what will happen next. i gues when zack is angry he go from a puppy to a angry grown up dog and when they are angry they never listen gues they gona need angeal to calm him down the only one with controll on the puppy

wonder how sephiroth gona take it knowing zack just gave him a punch lol. a great funny chapter alot of humor looking forward to read more :D

so update soon :D
RikkuFukaimori chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Dear god that was epic.
Dragi chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
rofl. poor sephiroth. maybe he should try and find out how he has dealed with a pancake loving cloud for 4 weeks looking forward to read more :D
reokumaurer chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
XD NP about the wait I'm a pretty Patience person, and i go with the longer the wait the better the result XD.

But LOL Seph getting high on a hormone injection XD, now that i did not see coming, although i would love to of seen the scene where Seph pounced on Cloud XD i bet could was thinking "WTF! what the hell is going on here!" XD. But god Hojo's laugh DX thats way too nasty to even think about first thing in the morning XD.

Also I'm loving the fact that cloud seems to be the person kinda in charge at the moment, ordering Seph around to make pancakes and thinking about a wedding already I feel sorry for him in a way but some how i see him not taking this much longer, well i guess i will see soon enough XD.

Thanks for the story, i look forward to the development.