|Reviews for The Decision|
| Sherwood374 chapter 3 . 5/10/2012
WomAn means 1 person, WomEn means more than 1 person. You usually write: 'Shepherd looked at the women he loved walking beside him.'
When it should be: 'Shepherd looked at the woman he loved walking beside him.'
Understand? (Other than that and a few other spelling/grammar mistakes, its good)
| Zanegar chapter 8 . 3/17/2012
I was a bit disapointed when this kin of thing didnt happen in mass effect 3... still... Great story!
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 7 . 8/26/2010
woah CAT FIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! lol
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 6 . 8/26/2010
hahah i like what you said about the next chapter lol
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 5 . 8/26/2010
can anyone say crazy woman ? lol
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 4 . 8/26/2010
great chapter :D
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 3 . 8/26/2010
awesome chapter it rules :D
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 2 . 8/26/2010
| Super-Saiyan-3-Vegeta chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
rofl i started laughing at the end lol hilarious lol
| deathunit100010 chapter 8 . 8/26/2010
Great. I cant explain it, but the closest word i can come up with is being... pleased.
You ever had revenge on someone and felt that great sensation run through your body? Adrenaline maybe? I just felt something like it.
Words cant express, i guess. I do, however know of a word to express this follow-up chapter.
| Infernal00 chapter 7 . 8/25/2010
Would have like to have seen her knife or Chiktikka vas Paus making an entrance but this was great stuff.
ps. Poor Tali, il send her a get well card.
| deathunit100010 chapter 7 . 8/25/2010
Everything a Fic needs to be successful. I applaud you.
| deathunit100010 chapter 5 . 8/21/2010
Yup. She's a stalker alright. I could tell as soon as that gleam in her eye showed up.
| tim94 chapter 6 . 8/21/2010
wtf do you mean "shes going to go batsh*t crazy"! she already has...and if that chapter was sane, then im spacing myself through the trash compactor.
| pepoluan chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
This looks interesting... but I do think you need a betareader. There are grammar errors and stilted sentences.
As it is now, I can't fully enjoy the story. I'll have to admit that this is a diamond-in-the-rough.