|Reviews for Forget about Freeman|
| imnotraven16 chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
| Corp. Jack Haven chapter 1 . 3/14/2013
Damn good story! Keep at it!
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 3 . 2/6/2013
ohhh i love your Shephard's personality... its exactly how i imagine it should be.
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
hehehehhehheeeh ohhh i remember that day, when i got my shockroach... hmm i named her Virella. but i love the name Shannon, i actually have a kickass character i created myself named Shannon, great name, Irish, love the Irish.
i definitely like how this story is going.
eh i know it probably hasn't been updated in a while, at least i think thats what the updated numbers say, but i like to have hope.
hehehheeh i remember the wrench... and i miss it, but the shockroach was definitely an excellant weapon... except under water of course.
| The Grinning Psychopath chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
heheheheh ahh i remember that place... certainly was interesting.
hmm i hope you eventually write more for this story, it was fun playing Adrian.
| Murus chapter 4 . 12/15/2011
I'm very much looking forward to more New California Dreaming, but don't forget this one either, please! This is too awesome to die, I absolutely love it.
| Tigerman4527 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011
Love it. Keep up the good work! )
| Pokybyte chapter 4 . 10/19/2011
Pleeease tell me you havent given up on this story! I'd love to see an update again. good stuff!
| DD42 chapter 4 . 9/17/2011
Excellent writing, you've got all the details nailed down to the letter. Can't wait for more :)
| Pokybyte chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
just wanted to say good job :) keep it up, I look forward to reading more
| DonLyn chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
| Lord Michael Blackburn chapter 4 . 7/23/2011
bravo, i am reviewing this chapter to cover all your currnet chapters, so i will cut to the chase: we all love sheppard, and you give him more life than vavle ever did, and i hope you do more, as this is a kick-ass story, and the pipe wrench sloves all problems, indeed.
| God and the Snake chapter 4 . 7/20/2011
You know, someones got to start selling Crowbars and Pipe wrenches to ward against alien invasion. I mean, guys with State of the Art, cutting edge weapons are slaughtered, but the Mainentices tool boys are freaking heros. There is a pattern there.
| MichaelPuffer chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
Great chapter! Please upload as soon as you can!
| nartohaloevovled chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
Excellent story so far!
Good combat scene, but i keep wondering, Is he going to have to slowly get rid of his old guns as they run outta ammo?