|Reviews for To Have and To Hold|
| Lost In Belgium chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
So many twists and turns - good read, impossible to stop once started.
Some characters OOC - Esme a bitch? Or is she just protecting her family?
| EverlastingMuse chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
good! update soon! i'm hooked!
| abbymickey24 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Fucking awesome. I loved how you ended it and everything.
| moore8879 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This was such an amazing story. I loved it. WOW!
| teamcullen-candi chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
oh I hope Jasper puts a whoop down aon Jame pfft but great story! hope we get more to it:D
| Wine and Cheesy chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Great story. Did not see that twist. Great cliffy.
| twimama77 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
so very cool
| Cullen Cousin chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Ghad.. Honestly, you should have done this as a chapter story! Loved the plot! It had me thinking who it could be. Of course Edward wss the first one I suspected. Next, I thought of James for some reason then dismissed it. That was until she started questioning Charlotte about Jasper's habits, my James theory kicked in again!
Loved the ending even though it was in a form of a cliffy!
Excellent job my dear, excellent job!
| carter1018 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
great story i like the twist keep it up.
| LyssiLuvr chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This is a very good story! I'd like to see mpre chapters of it! Please write more soon!
| slc6548 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
That was really good - I was completely glued to the screen - just couldn't stop reading till I got to the end.
| JaspersBella chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
You got a very good story going on here.
I snickered at Peter and Charlotte being Jasper's parents.
Damn I was really hoping Edward was the bad guy, even more so than usual.
Nice with the switch of the babies, wasn't expecting the bomb of James.
Yeah, Jasper to the rescue.
| ebonyeyez1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Great premise, which you had continued it.
| TwilightMommyof4girls chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
| Miss-Beckie-Louise chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
This is awesome!
Love it :)
is there anything else to go with it? or just a O/s?