Reviews for Spaces
hobo ghost chapter 21 . 5/29
I really love your story, how you describe every character in here (especially carter with his dirty jokes lol). Lovely work, can't wait for the update
hobo ghost chapter 21 . 5/29
aw man...kai my boy is so sad I want to cheer him up
hobo ghost chapter 20 . 5/29
barney stinson is really ideal playboy man
hobo ghost chapter 19 . 5/29
omg kai
hobo ghost chapter 16 . 5/29
Lol kai
hobo ghost chapter 8 . 4/5
it's confusing when previous chapter doctor like pushing claire to outside, and the next chapter he talk to her like nothing happens... maybe a lil' explanation of development would do good. but overall story is good, keep up the good work
hobo ghost chapter 1 . 4/5
sweet poppa
The Yoshinator chapter 9 . 10/18/2014
Trent's past seems rather similar to Lucy's from Elfen Lied. Except Lucy murdered them all whilst Trent retreated inward.
L'Archel-Hotishi chapter 20 . 2/5/2012
Another amazing chapter! The ending is great, and I can tell a lot of effort was put into it!

I love the story and plot but, just for future reference, perhaps work on your usage of commas to break up sentences. But, other than that really tiny, insignificant thing...this was perfect!

Bravo, and I hope to see even more from you in the future!
Destiny Girl 15 chapter 21 . 1/28/2012
This... story... is... AMAZING! No, it's mind-blowing!XD This has been marked as one of my favorites! Including you, JoceDaAmetuer, your art is incredible! I'm both a writer and an artist as well, though I don't think I measure to your standards! _ Spaces was soooo funny (which I love), well detailed (not too short, not too long and boring), and I loved the way you portrayed the characters.:P Claire would have to be my fav! Just because I played so many years on that HM game...

I actually really liked the ending. A great cliffhanger, you did an outstanding job with this! _

Your loyal fan,

~Destiny
missbabblingbrook21 chapter 21 . 1/27/2012
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh (inset fangirl scream!)Sequel something please Kai's all alone and Rey is coming please another story please! I have to know what will happen!

xXx Missbabblingbrook21
missbabblingbrook21 chapter 20 . 1/25/2012
Beautiful lovely tragic, I was crying when Kai made his love confession, Laughing my head off when Gray was telling Trent about Kai's and Claire's little incident and being bubbly and happy when they got married and well did it. I like how you had them wait till after marriage I think it made the couple seem more mature and in love since they waited most authors usually don't in their stories overall this has been one of my favorite Trent and Claire stories. It was funney romantic sad and I love Kai and Grays personalities they are hilarious. Trent and Claire have the best chemistry. I'm sad it's over but I feel like it all concluded well with all the loose ends tied up! Great job for a 1st story! Hope to see more from you.

xXx Missbabblingbrook21 :)

ps: sad last review ever for this story :'( (wipes away a tear)
MorWolfMor chapter 20 . 1/24/2012
Yay for cute endings! :D good job :) I liked it

~Wolfy
lunatan chapter 19 . 11/17/2011
this story is AMAZING! OMG when are you gonna write more! i must know what happens! its gonna kill me!
KinPikapika251291 chapter 19 . 11/15/2011
heeyy.. i love this chapter and previous chapters! Well, Claire.. Say you like that Blue Feather! Ha-ha! XD
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