Reviews for Torn
Guest chapter 28 . 7/15
Love it.
Guest chapter 28 . 2/8
Would love more
witchbaby300 chapter 28 . 12/29/2011
I like your character. She's very mature for a 13 year old. The part I really wanna see is when anna invites them up to the ship to have dinner! That should be good!
witchbaby300 chapter 27 . 12/26/2011
Awwww that was a really sweet mother daughter moment right there! I also love Hobbs and his sarcastic smart mouth! Please continue to update!
witchbaby300 chapter 26 . 12/20/2011
Yay! I had no idea you updated! Lol I should check my email more often. Anyways I love it as always and I can't wait for more! Pretty please?
witchbaby300 chapter 25 . 12/12/2011
Oh my gosh you really updated! I have to start checking my emails. Lol love it as always! I hope she really does tell her daughter the truth.
witchbaby300 chapter 24 . 11/20/2011
Ok first off i freaking LOVE this story! Just the way you tied your character into the plot and made it your own. You wrote the story so well i felt all the emotion as i was reading. I also wanted to say i am very happy you got a book deal! Thats one of my dreams! Make sure to let us know what the title is and when it comes out so we can keep an eye out k?
shereelouise60 chapter 24 . 11/12/2011
this story just keeps better and better and I love how you have added in an original oc into the mix
Ithileon chapter 22 . 9/18/2011
Wow. Poor Kaitlyn.
Reptile Princess chapter 19 . 8/19/2011
Tyler's stupid. He's not fat enough to sit on Katie. retpahC dooG (What? I felt like writing backwards)
anonymous chapter 17 . 7/29/2011
hey, this is really good! normally, i'm not too fond of ocs but i quite like kaitlyn. although, be careful she doesn't become a mary sue!
shereelouise60 chapter 16 . 7/19/2011
best chapter yet
marmalade chapter 15 . 7/15/2011
Aw you're actually making me like Tyler here! Poor Kaiti... As always good update and more soon!
shereelouise60 chapter 14 . 7/11/2011
this story just keeps getting better with each chapter added to it - can't wait for the next installment.
skycord1990 chapter 12 . 7/5/2011
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!
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