|Reviews for Chase|
| Kaist chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
Ahahaha, this is epic!
| ArchadianRose chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
you get 5 stars for this! Ahhhh. I peed a little...laughing ofc xD
| AkumaStrife chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I love you. I know i've said it before, but i mean it way more this time. Seriously, i've been having a really shitty day, and to get to read this made everything a little bit better ) I was laughing the entire time, cause it was just that funny. You just saved the rest of my night. All those funny quirks you used (like the WoL needing a real name) was just hilarious. And these characters really are just soooo dumb XD Seriously, the things they 'need fixed', although Firion's was a legitimate concern. I could go on and on about every little aspect i liked, but that'd take a while, so i'll just stop here )
| Thien chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
LOL I was thinking Squall didn't have anything to complain and then there's this. Awesome XD Although, using the fire spell seems less clear as it's only part of a bigger move, unlike the one Leon uses, but whatever. As long as they keep fighting (and subsequently reconciliating.) Good job with their dialogs, too! Squall must have forgotten what led way to Seifer scarring him in the first place. XD
And Cloud reading a pelican story. Hahaha. For an advocate of children's book, he's really bad at story telling.