|Reviews for Its a BugCatching Tounament|
| zarien chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
nice job but sucks for her
| valeforXD chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Your writing is certainly getting better.
But I have a little advice:
Every time a different character speaks, you have to start a new paragraph.
"You're a n00b, Spawn," Vale proclaimed narcissistically. (/)
"Shut up or I'll chop your face off!" Spawn screamed, a knife gripped firmly in his veined hand.
Okay, do you get me?
I don't even know if narcissistically is a word, let alone spelt like that.
Otherwise, you're getting better.