Reviews for Its a BugCatching Tounament
zarien chapter 1 . 4/15/2011
nice job but sucks for her
valeforXD chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Your writing is certainly getting better.

But I have a little advice:

Every time a different character speaks, you have to start a new paragraph.

For example:

"You're a n00b, Spawn," Vale proclaimed narcissistically. (/)

"Shut up or I'll chop your face off!" Spawn screamed, a knife gripped firmly in his veined hand.

...

Okay, do you get me?

I don't even know if narcissistically is a word, let alone spelt like that.

Otherwise, you're getting better.