Reviews for The Punishment of Time
Mary Rose chapter 8 . 3/27
Oh, no! I had thought that phone was the key to her getting back to her rightful time.
Mary Rose chapter 7 . 3/26
I hope you finish it. I'd like to know if she ever escapes back to modern times or is stuck in the fifties forever.
Arva Bottley chapter 2 . 2/17
This chapter
Sapphire Dawn chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Oh, boy I wonder what is going to happen next to her.
Fawn Hickory chapter 7 . 9/4/2013
This is a very interesting story. There are some issues with the way it's written, but nothing a little proofreading couldn't fix. The idea is sound, and I look forward to seeing where it goes. :)
Sapphire Dawn chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
LOL, i would feel like crying too.
middaysunset chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Yay thank you for the update! :) this is getting more and more exciting!
middaysunset chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
Too lazy to login but this is really twilight zone-y! A fun read :)
JEREMY chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
Another journey into Attitude-Adjustment-LAND.
MonsterUniversity chapter 4 . 3/2/2012
Where's the ending?
csimouse chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
Good job! But you knew that already! :P
csimouse chapter 3 . 8/22/2010
Good job! ;)
Paradox Tremors chapter 2 . 8/15/2010
Another good chapter my friend
Paradox Tremors chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
I think you have a good opening. I like the idea of a good deed leading into possible trouble for Sophia Mclean. Keep up the good work my friend.
csimouse chapter 2 . 8/14/2010
Thanks for continuing! :) I so loved the old Twilight Zone!
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