Reviews for The Punishment of Time
Spencer chapter 1 . 3/13
This is so cool! i love it!
Mlle Fanfic Guest chapter 10 . 1/8
Your story is very interesting and I'd love to see where it goes and why that town's stuck in the 50's.
Also I'd suggest you give it a twist ending to make it a true TZ fanfic. :)
Mary Rose chapter 10 . 11/22/2014
Personally, I like things tied up in a neat package because real life doesn't always work that way and I read fiction to escape from reality. I also dig happy endings, which is why the ending for 'Time Enough At Last' sucked. But it's your story and you have to write it the way you feel it.
Mary Rose chapter 9 . 11/14/2014
I'm still following and I'm still interested.
Mary Rose chapter 8 . 3/27/2014
Oh, no! I had thought that phone was the key to her getting back to her rightful time.
Mary Rose chapter 7 . 3/26/2014
I hope you finish it. I'd like to know if she ever escapes back to modern times or is stuck in the fifties forever.
Arva Bottley chapter 2 . 2/17/2014
This chapter
Sapphire Dawn chapter 7 . 9/7/2013
Oh, boy I wonder what is going to happen next to her.
Fawn Hickory chapter 7 . 9/4/2013
This is a very interesting story. There are some issues with the way it's written, but nothing a little proofreading couldn't fix. The idea is sound, and I look forward to seeing where it goes. :)
Sapphire Dawn chapter 6 . 9/3/2013
LOL, i would feel like crying too.
middaysunset chapter 6 . 9/1/2013
Yay thank you for the update! :) this is getting more and more exciting!
middaysunset chapter 5 . 8/28/2013
Too lazy to login but this is really twilight zone-y! A fun read :)
JEREMY chapter 5 . 10/1/2012
Another journey into Attitude-Adjustment-LAND.
MonsterUniversity chapter 4 . 3/2/2012
Where's the ending?
csimouse chapter 4 . 9/18/2010
Good job! But you knew that already! :P
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