Reviews for Do Not Pass Go: Do Not Collect 200 Dollars!
Bits And Pieces chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
"You just had to speak British, Newkirk,"

ROTFL! That line cracked me up! Leave it to Hogan to finally figure it out. :) And Carter with the jigsaw puzzle...that was so him! LOL Great chapter! I must admit, I'm curious to know what the message is. Hope you update again soon!
Sierra Sutherwinds chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
That's why Hogan is the colonel. Really smart of him to get the clues together. What a relief that they found something before they had to ask for help. "We'll look stupid," I'm still laughing on this one.

Great chapter, can't wait for more. This is really funny and intriguing.
ColHogan chapter 3 . 8/18/2010
I could really have seen this as an episode of the series. What a riot! The scene with the guys following Hogan from the barracks to the rec hall reminds me of the episode in which Hogan and the team were chasing that little dog. Loved the scene with Carter and the jigsaw puzzle. And I have a suspicion that once Kinch translates what's on that paper Hogan found, there's gonna be more frustration.
Kirarakim chapter 2 . 8/17/2010
That was a very amusing game of Monopoly. I think I can relate to Newkirk and Carter during this. Monopoly can be a very frustrating game. :)
Linda G chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
We used to play this game all the time when I was little... but it was sure hard to get into it as an adult when my son wanted to play... yeah... I hear the boys! LOL
Deana chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
ROTFL what a cute chapter! I could picture it in my head. LOL
Marie1964 chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
I loved the humor in this chapter- especially that it was Newkirk who landed in jail, and Carter in the beauty contest.
Bits And Pieces chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
This was probably the most amusing game of Monopoly I've seen. LOL! I could see them playing like I was sitting at the table, watching. Poor Newkirk; that's where I usually end up, too! LOL Loved LeBeau's reaction at the end. I wonder where the message is? I hope the guys find it soon. Great chapter! Thanks for the update.
ColHogan chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
Looks like Hogan is going crazy wondering where the hidden message is in this board game. I enjoyed how everybody decided to take off when Hogan suggested they play the board game, and he had to end up ordering them to play it. Loved LeBeau's reaction when he realized he'd won the game. Naturally Newkirk would be the banker. I wonder where the hidden message is and will the guys ever find it?
Sierra Sutherwinds chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
I must confess that Monopoly is the most boring game I've ever played (a cultural thing, I guess.) Anyway, you make it look so exciting and fun, I would've wished to play with those guys. And Newkirk goes to jail! That's so funny! That was my usual place in the game BTW LOL.

Thanks for the update. Don't be late, please, it looks we're going somewhere from here.
ColHogan chapter 1 . 8/12/2010
Very interesting beginning to what promises to be another fabulous story by this author knowing her previous work. Can't wait to see where she takes things.
The Layman chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Ooh, sounds interesting. Hope you plan on writing more!
El Gringo Loco chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
An amusing beginning to what looks like a delightful story - I look forward to reading more.
Kirarakim chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
What a cute idea for a story. I remember reading this article and I found it pretty fascinating (sometimes truth is stranger than fiction as they say).

I loved Newkirk and Carter getting confused over the British/American titles for the games. Oddly enough I am from the US and I always thought of the game as "Snakes & Ladders". The rest I was definitely not familiar with the British names. So I guess I learned some stuff today.
Marie1964 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
The men playing Monopoly to find the hidden message is an interesting premise. I also enjoyed the English/English-American/English dialogue between Newkirk and Carter.
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