|Reviews for Do Not Pass Go: Do Not Collect 200 Dollars!|
| L J Groundwater chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Hee hee hee... "I'm not staying for this." Line of the day. LOL!
| waikiki23 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Snooky, glad to see you back! I love this story so far. I love the game Monopoly so I can't wait to see where you go with this story. Please update soon.
| Deana chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
LOL cute so far!
| St PA chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Your use of the British and American names for the different games was brilliant. I learned something new. In the whole equation of the story, I'm sorry but I didn't easily pick up on where or how Newkirk and Carter were to find the message or code. I'm still in the dark as to the significance of the Monopoly game and what message they are taking back to the barracks.
| Sierra Sutherwinds chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
This is hilarious and inventive all the way! I love the way you play with the words LOL Surely they need English-English translators!
First chapter is a gem, I'm very curious for what it's next!
| Bits And Pieces chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Yay! I'm so happy to see a new story from you! And this one is wonderful so far! The conversation about the code names was great; and Carter and Newkirk checking the contents of the crates...ROTFL! That scene was priceless! So many great lines!
You really come up with such terrific ideas. :) I can hardly wait for the next chapter!