|Reviews for All Jokes Aside|
| Art Is The Weapon chapter 17 . 5/24
The story of this was good and I did enjoy it but I really feel like this could have benefitted from having a beta. There were a good few grammatical errors and typos, and the shifts from past to present tense felt a little jarring. Still, good job on the plot.
| DamonFan1300 chapter 17 . 3/2/2014
YOU ARE SOOOO SKILLED!
| Sage chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
Lol bitch I hate u... Jk jk I love ur story's I'm Absolutely addicted to them I just can't get enough
| MysteryMadchen chapter 17 . 2/11/2013
Ok just found the story and skimmed more than read at this point, but, is there a sequel? Do i get to have some good old fashioned limp Sam follow-up. Thanks for not putting any slash in the story. What I read had me on the edge of my seat!
| wInChEsTeR bRoS iNc chapter 17 . 3/29/2012
great story! to my favourites!
| ArmedWithMyComputer chapter 17 . 7/27/2011
Hey :) I just found this story, and I really like it! Its so amazing... Great job :D
~ ArmedWithMyComputer xxx
| C.C. Nyde chapter 17 . 10/10/2010
:) I liked it. So glad Sammy got out alright! It had a few grammar and/or spelling mistakes in each chapter, but that's alright, cause it happens to everyone! :)
| casammy chapter 17 . 9/12/2010
happy, because finish the the torture of dean and sammy
| Shannanigans chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Hey there, I really enjoy your stories! This one, in particular, was interesting because I worked for the McDonalds Charity. I've worked with Ronald several times, lol!
I hope you don't mind me saying this - I hate it when people are mean - but if you double checked your stories for spelling and grammatical errors before posting, they could be EVEN BETTER!
One to keep an eye on, is your use of "seen". In these instances it should have been "saw".
"The last thing he seen was Ronald taking his brother out of the bathroom and Sam desperately reaching for him."
Anyway, keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to more! :)
| The Banana Nut Muffin chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Sam and Dean were lucky here! I loved the ending, but I'm sad to see it go. :( Ronald and Sugar are dead, but what about the others?
And locking themselves in the bathroom was pretty smart of Dean, and it's cute how he's always protecting his brother! Awwuh, I can't wait for your next story now! :D
| NetMyne01 chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Clowns are evil! Thanks my friend, this was an amazing story. I'm sad to see it's complete, but I'll be on the look out for the new one!
| Leahelisabeth chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Awesome! I enjoyed this so much! I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| dopeyangel101 chapter 17 . 9/11/2010
Awesome! Really sad to see it go, but it was awesome!
| CeCe Away chapter 17 . 9/10/2010
Yay! So glad they finally got away. I was a little worried the torture was going to go on forever... Lovely little tale. Thanks for writing and sharing.
| Ellie Clemons chapter 17 . 9/10/2010
wow! Great ending! It was very exciting :) And to tell you the truth i am sad that this story is ending! I was always looking forward to it! Are you going to write my story now?