Reviews for What Makes a Dad English Version
TheLadyPendragon chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I really like this. I love Adam, and I've wished I could see John's take on their relationship. Even though this is in Adam's POV, I liked John telling Adam, without so many words, that he's sorry for now being there. Poor Adam. :(
Beizanten chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
it's a great story. I like that you make it from Adam Pov. John and Adam was iC. I think that's how they relationship is. Distant but warm. Adam may have been lonely without his dad and his mother busy working but at least he had live a normal life.
kennko-hime chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
hi there, sopraness. ;) can you recognise me from my penname? hahaha~

ok, time for review now. jujur aja aku ga nguasain fandomnya neh. :p tapi setelah meng-compare yang ini ama yang versi bahasa, aku lebih suka yang ini. penulisanmu udah oke, caramu nyeritain hubungan ayah-anak itu juga natural bgt. #oposeh #sotoy

yosh, keep-writing ya!