|Reviews for Dramione Do's and Don't's|
| my breathing cosmos chapter 1 . 2/12
| Erica T chapter 1 . 5/31/2016
FOLLOW ALL OF THESE STEPS! I fully stand by all of these steps. I would allow a pass on step 4 or 7, but this author is correct, they have been done to death. therefore if you are going to incorporate them make sure you have other interesting angles in your plot.
| Kahli Hime chapter 1 . 9/8/2013
Hmm, very useful tips :)
| BellaTallin chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
LOL. It's about time someone said it if you ask me! :-D
| cooemi10 chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
your forgot "love juice" (shudders in utter disgust and revulsion) or even just "juice" (continues to cringe)
| Akemi831Sato chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
hahahahah. . . witty. . .
| fireprincess326 chapter 1 . 12/2/2011
Hahahahahahahahaha! total agree with you, 100%.
| toavoidconversation chapter 1 . 3/31/2011
ahhaaaa I loved it...its seriously a great guideline for anyone writing a dramione...sorry to say I've used a few of those cliches myself...*blush* but only two I think, and in my defence , i use 'slytherin sex god' as a mockery so... :P
great job, love it :)
| nighttheraven chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
I need 2 remember this when I finally write mine! :)
| CelestialElegy chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
second part of number 8 is fun but only if its like after u know i like stories where they hide it. know any of those?
| licensetospeak chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
Makes perfect sense! I'm not a writer, but I do love reading fanfics..especially dramoine. I just hope others will follow your advice/tips.. coz its kind of tiring reading the same plot line again and again. anyways.. great job!
| MizSphinx chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
I agreed with everything except Step Four. Personally, I do enjoy them sharing living quarters. I like the bickering that ensues and the unresolved sexual tension that permeates in close spaces, teehee! But I still think you did a pretty good job explaining the rest. Cliche's are no fun but sometimes a well written story, cliche-ridden as it may be, can be worth the read. Nevertheless, thanks for posting this informative list. I hope that following Dramione writers would read this first before plunging ahead and bungling their fic up by including ALL of your don'ts lol.
| sweetestlittlelies chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I love this! you did a really great job writing this, and all of the points you made are wonderful. I know i've used the Hermione and Draco share a living space & bathroom once or twice, but you're right, readers have come to expect it (i know i have).
The one point I absolutely LOVE though, is the one about the marriage law. I see it tons of times, and some people use it well, but some are just horrible with it and it ruins a potentially good story.
but anyways, great job! i look forward to reading more of your stories!
| Imperium Mortis chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
As I saw a reviewer before me mention, this really hits the nail directly on its head. And drives it so deep into the wood it's inpercievable. Thank you.
| Tasshhy chapter 1 . 9/18/2010
i love step 6! it fantastic! :D