Reviews for Unwanted Truth
Sad chapter 19 . 1/12
Whyyyyy did u kill Zero WHYYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyYyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
James Birdsong chapter 19 . 8/22/2017
Good ending
Song Butterfly Girl chapter 19 . 6/14/2015
That was so good even though Zero died it was incredible *claps*
Becky chapter 19 . 5/25/2014
Why did he have to die! Besides that, it was awesome! However, why opal for the ring?
Random person chapter 19 . 2/22/2014
I love your fan fiction!

But it was so sad in the end.

I was like "why did zero have to die!" (Cry)

I actually cried a bit.

Thanks for your awesome fan fiction hope you make more
mangalover247 chapter 19 . 11/2/2013
How sad I'm crying right now. So so so sad in the end but nice at the same time. But overall I loved your story. :,( ;)
Kingdom's Oathkeeper chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Haha good one xD
GracefulMurder chapter 19 . 6/25/2013
Gah! The feels bro! UGH HE SHOULD HAVE LIVED FOR HIS KIDS SCREW THE GREATER GOOD! But besides that great story!
NinaYamada-Zero chapter 19 . 5/25/2013
Even with Zero gone, it was a lovely story. I started to cry, but in the end, nothing could ever compare to what Tomoya went through when Nagisa died in Clannad, or the love story that really happens between Zero and Nina. Go to to read the manga guys, it's awesome, and I'll be getting back to my story soon (sorry, schools a bitch)
James Birdsong chapter 18 . 5/13/2013
kesharocks1071 chapter 18 . 4/30/2013
OH MY GOSH! I WANT TO KNOW MORE! I'M DYING HERE... Literially, I just stabbed myself from the suspense... O.o
NinaYamada-Zero chapter 18 . 4/30/2013
Haha great! I'm glad you're getting to finish it like you wanted!
Madam Jacinta o3o chapter 17 . 4/15/2013
Awesome. If only you just made it so it would be a month to analyze. . Anyway I really enjoyed this, I just have one thing to say... DON'T LET ZERO DIE. -
Madam Jacinta o3o chapter 4 . 4/15/2013
Soooo romantic! o3o I've been searching for a Mamotte Lollipop! fanfiction for like.. FOREVER! Finally found one that's good AND has alot of chapters :D
Annie chapter 17 . 3/30/2013
Ok , here's my review finish the freanken story till the end with the baby and tell if zero is dead or not
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