Reviews for Monday morning
axd3258 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
i ADORE this story. definitely my new favorite one shot...ever.

LOVE. amazing. :D
anakadb chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
beautiful :] I loved the way we can see how his opinion changes, how his heart is coming back to life.

Absolutely beautiful!
melissamary55 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
really good story is was really long but really good is the going to be other chapters
soclose137 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
AH! i love this so much. i love your writing. soooo much.

and this had the best ending.

i was so sad when TINML ended but i'm so excited that your writing more things!

keep up the AMAZING work!
linrusli chapter 1 . 8/5/2010

Usually I don't like one shot because the story just pieces,not complete.

But,when I found this...OMG,I love it...

I even cry a few times while read this...

I think if you want to write this as a multi chapter story,it will be great...

Hope to hear a lot of fantastic story from you again...

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muzaklover chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I have to say that was very heartwarming. I hated Edward at the beginning but loved him at the end. You are such a talented writer and I enjoy reading your work. I can't wait to read more from you in the future.
biblepam chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
finally the site let me back into the story... are all your stories going to make me weepy? this was a moving story. It was sort of the awakening of 'Edward'.. finding someone whom he cared for more than working or himself... awesome story.. thanks for posting... Pam B.
amwine chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I love it! Great job...thanks so much!
Erint0812 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
That was awesome! I loved it. It was really sweet. Please keep writing!
rtexas chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Ahhhhh . . . adorable!
MessyBar chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
That was just perfect and awesome. Thank you for sharing. Loved seeing Edward transform
RCH81 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
! I am not usually a fan of the one shot but this was amazing, and sweet, and sad. StalkerEdward - I like him. He is romantic and a little crazy. Bella's story was heartbreaking. Thank you for writing this!
Sophie2003 chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Hi. this is my review.

Write more. please. Anything. I would read any story of yours, with your perfectly flawed characters. But B&E stuff, please.

That is all. :)
karolkid chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I loved this, it was so sweet! I had to control tears several times while reading. Was this a one shot or a continuing story...I missed that part. Thanks for writing!
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