|Reviews for Surabaya Santa|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/15
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Whoa! Good background story, yeah! Julieta
| Meredith44 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
You weren't kidding when you said it was serious! I have a soft spot for younger Michael fics (it was what my never published "lie to me" challenge fic was about), so I loved it. And poor Nate! Your characters were definitely more IC than mine! :D
| Goldenleaf 1510 chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
That was just perfect. I'm sure it happened exactly that way, and the voices of Madeline and Mike were beautifully written. That photo needed a story!
| WhatAmIDoingHere chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Oh, how sad! Sigh. Poor Michael. Poor Madeline. Poor Nate!