|Reviews for Gorgeous Girls and Jealous Boys|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
What happens next!? I need to know!
| natlovesyou chapter 1 . 1/16/2012
Wow! This is absolutely amazing! I really really loved it :)
| Amozon28 chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
good so far, but it would make it easier to follow if you made a new paragraph everytime somebody new spoke like;
"The scene's a little slack, don't you think Aerrow?" Finn asked. Aerrow stared ahead of him blankly, "Atmos to Aerrow?" Finn snapped his fingers twice in front of Aerrow's face. He then drew his stinging hand back from Aerrow with haste. They were stinging because Aerrow didn't appreciate snapping fingers in his face
"I heard you Finn. This is Terra Rex, so you'd have to expect a few slack things about the place. Just be glad Piper agreed to let us come. Considering the last time we here... well you remember how mad she was for the next three weeks."
Finn groaned, he did remember.
its easier like this than it being all bunched up into one paragragh
| RiddleRose13 chapter 2 . 1/19/2011
Oooh, cliff-hanger. I love this story already! Please update soon
| Rebellious Rebecca chapter 2 . 12/20/2010
O.O wat happens next?
| Amelie-the-pony chapter 2 . 12/6/2010
KOOLIES this is a great story i wonder wat happens next? _
| Amelie-the-pony chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
who was the dark shadow, and is there going to be more, you cant leave it with a cliffhanger