|Reviews for Sunshine|
| Amiinyan chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
| songstressclch chapter 1 . 9/27/2012
Great imagery! (: lovef every minute of it
| Kam14 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
You did an awesome job writing this one-shot it would be an awesome story though if you decided to write more to it.
| Bert8813 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
naughty and romantic i like it!
| AbsentAnastasia chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
You actually made it~!
'Cept, next time, less slang and more technical terms would probably make it better. And it seemed like the word 'breast' was awfully repetitive. So substitution terms would be nice, too.
Other than that, and a few grammar mistakes here and there, 'twas swell.