Reviews for The Trouble with Pristesses
XXX chapter 2 . 8/29/2011
Very good.
xxx chapter 2 . 8/13/2011
Great.
DaveDShow chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Holli and Viktoria-gee, wonder whom they could be?(lol)

This was a lot of fun-Discord is ever eager to stir up trouble-that's how she rolls-but it was interesting to see that she feels that she is up against the glass ceiling. Guess that happens in both the worlds of mortals and gods alike. Anyway, looks like they're all about to have some fun. Things are definitely taking an upturn!(lol)
Lodylodylody chapter 2 . 8/6/2010
Too damn funny. I loved the original take (really...loved it a LOT) but this more humorous version fits in so well with the style you established. The banter and bickering and the disrespect for poor Discord. (Holli and Viktoria were actually lucky they didn't tick her off and have her fireball them...but I'm betting Discord is tolerant of them becuase she likes them a bit). :)

Holli inventing the new game...that Viktoria can't figure out how to win at was too hilarious. (Of course she'd always pick rock...it makes perfect sense). :P

And then for them to come together and have a sweet life together...that was very enjoyable. I approve. (But I also approve of the fight to the death too). Thanks for this great gift of a story.
Lodylodylody chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
Okay, this way epic.

The crazy elements you threw together to work with...and then you make it a compelling story? How did you do that?

The setting and backstory for Holli and Viktoria was just genuis. Very creative. If I were Discord I would have certainly wanted them for my priestesses. Making Vik an Amazon was a masterstroke. And then making Saffron the head of the brothel...nice little bit there.

The bickering and banter and tone were all fun and light and perfect...and then it suddenyl turns into a matter of life and death. Shocking but very effective in that I was totally in suspense at how this would turn out. You could have made Holli pull of a big upset...but then you also showed how skilled Viktoria was...I had no idea how it would end. So sad when they looked at each other for the final time and knew only one would live.

At least Viktoria got a happy ending...and Discord got a great priestess.