|Reviews for Oh, that woman!|
| Tiffanyfrench chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
So cute I must go first cracked me up so bad. I loved it wish there was more.
| Kay8abc chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I really liked it. I loved how they interact with one another insideand outside work.
| MirandaMinerva chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
A delightful, light-hearted romp. I can definitely see the two of them keeping up their fiery clashes at work even if they were mates outside of work. :)
| Labyrinth01 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Great, sexy story! But I was wondering where Fritz was, since Brenda seems to be spending a lot of time at Sharon's house. I think you should write a story where Fritz walks in on them. He will be torn between being shocked and horrified to be really turned on. After all, all men get really turned on at the idea of two women together.
I mentioned in another review that your stories have many spelling errors in them. Unfortunately, they detract from good writing and an interesting story line. I would be more than happy to beta your stories for you. I love to edit, I have 3 Master's degrees, and am the daughter of 2 English professors. I have written several stories for The Closer you can check out, including some pretty steamy M-rated ones, so you can check for yourself that I'm a pretty good writer, if I do say so myself. So just let me know if you would like me to beta anything for you; it would be an honor to help clean up your very good stories.
Um, I have to mention a couple errors now, because I have seen them in more than one of your stories, and they might be happening because of the non-English speaking thing:
1)Two people "butt heads" not "buttheads." "Buttheads" is an insulting term stupid teenage boys use for each other, so it really stands out in your stories as very out of place.
2)You leave problems at the DOOR, not the doormat.
| SkyB chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
I must admit it's not my usual cup of tea and I don't enjoy this genre, but, when something is written well - it's good no matter the genre and this is good! I enjoyed it, thank you.
| sugarcanefoxinc chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I love it! Just the right amount of presh to put me back in a good mood. Merci beaucoup!