Reviews for Innocence
May-Ruzuki chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
Dont worry, others have worked the Crown Clown bondage angle too. I think its kind of hot. XD
Lenore91 chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
This is good. As an idea, its a little creepy but you managed to make this really work. Kinda sweet, in a way. Loving, even.
Requiem of memory chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
people seem to like that crown clown bondage stuff xD
ChibiCHICKENluver chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
i love this so much. i cant.
HairbringerOfPain chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
Really good story, good amount of detail, and you didn't rush into the good part. 8.4/10 for a story. And 8.9/10 for a one shot
Fuyutsuki Kasumi chapter 1 . 10/24/2011
Amazing! I loved it! *-*
Jason chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Brilliant, thanks so much and keep writing!
flufffmufffin chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
XD hehe wow. I really like the

Place they decided to be. Lol

And the idea is very cute. And interesting. XD haha lol

Good work!
Pisces95 chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Kiyoko4173 chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Wow surprisingly sweet, I didn't expect it to be so nice and not like pervy. Well done x
JustineAme chapter 1 . 8/31/2010
it was awesome!
Uncoloured186 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
At the beginning, I almost think that they didn't love each other while doing IT. Thankfully, I read the three important words near the end. The idea of this story is fresh, so thanks for sharing. :D
Zophiel Lagace chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
It was a good kinky idea _ Really hot!
Angel Fantasy chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
*licks lips* delicious... I liked how they used their Innocences in their coupling. Though you could have used CC a little more in there; more hand stimulation (from lena to All), stripe foreplay, etc. Still, this is a very good start.

Hope to read more of this in the future! chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
I... haven't actually read something quite like this before, so def brownie points for the creativity :)

Kinky is not really the word because it was too filled with 'aww~~', but it's no nursery either, teehee~~ I liked it, cute work!

17 | Page 1 2 Next »